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Orbit5565
Orbit5565Lv25yr
2019-10-31 01:18

I fount this novel one day ago and did not stop reading until I had finished the entire thing. The characters are lovable and take logical actions that don’t leave you thinking that they are only doing something for the plot. The story so far is fun and has developed well with decent world building. The writer has not put himself into a corner and has allowed the story to progress steadily if a bit fast. The only problem I have with the writing it that there is sometimes letters or spaces missing which while they don’t destroy the reading experience or story can be quite annoying. All in all I think it an amazing novel and I would recommend it.

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brother_pheonix
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Thank you. I will work on the parts I too have a hard time with. Critique as you wish. I will do my best to take the time to fix them

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