brother_pheonix
The written word reflects the soul. And souls writing of worlds they remember will draw those who will visit them later.
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brother_pheonix2 days agoCommentedthank you for the chapter. And it is true that Ludwig is gonna have a hard time with things if he has to find something to use as his "heart". It's gonna be difficult to find one of those if it took the king of Tibari Nearly a thousand years to find his.
- brother_pheonix3 days agoCommented
Holy. That would be quite the sudden change of view. The king fought to the end. His people gone and his only hope was the use of such powers that would destroy anything at a moment's touch. Only for him to fail. That's a harsh reality. Thank you author for relaying what few have ever witnessed, lived, or understood.
- brother_pheonix3 days agoCommented
A very nice chapter. Has good flow and still maintains attention of the readers. You learn quick
- brother_pheonix4 days agoCommented
Thank you Charlotte!!!
- brother_pheonix4 days agoCommented
Charlotte... Write the damn thing propperly
- brother_pheonix5 days agoReplied to Jhaydun
some things can be jaunted when describing sometimes. patiently read through them a time or two and see how they flow. Anything from a key turning in a lock to the sounds of a person walking within haunted halls can be jaunted, point to point. Its our job to make the points flow. The shadow key hissed as it entered the lock. the click of release echoing through the empty halls of Orlins mansion and Kai who alone lived within.
- brother_pheonix5 days agoCommented
well laid out though some parts could be a little smoother. still good though
- brother_pheonix6 days agoCommented
Thank you for the chapter. Now I'm just getting images of a the chibi king.
