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Sdrawkcab
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2019-01-19 11:32

Anone is a new writer, with fantastic stories built from an endless imagination. While he still struggles a bit with syntax while writing, it can normally be overlooked in the excitement of reading the story. Aaron Wade finds himself immersed into a dual world, one where he has to overcome family drama and claw his way to the top of a multibillion dollar company. Partnered with a fantastical line of side characters, from the strong willed love interest, the unfazeable and crazy bodyguard grandma, to the cute and lovable three-year-old son, he goes up against a despicable father who is willing to stoop to the lowest of the low to undermine all of Aaron's goals. In the other world, he has to build his in-game character up despite one unfair situation after another. The in-game world is exciting, well thought out, and draws the reader in, until they (at least I was) can't wait to see what happens next. Aaron is set up to be a very in depth character, in a well thought out world, trying to accomplish the impossible in two very different worlds. I've read to chapter 13, and I am not disappointed! I will definitely be reading more!

The Two Lives Of Aaron Wade: The Gamer & The Heir

Anone
4.4
200 Chs

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Anone
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You always make me look better than I think myself to be. Thanks for reading and for all your support, and for the kick ass review. It's the best I've read.

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Sdrawkcab
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Your welcome lol

Anone:You always make me look better than I think myself to be. Thanks for reading and for all your support, and for the kick ass review. It's the best I've read.
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Younus_Mohammed
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