Item: Showtime
Rating: 4.4
Author: amdc

amdcLv105yr

2019-01-30 18:09

This is not a story for the faint-hearted. This is not a story about love and romance, so dreamy-eyed readers back off. You have been warned. If you like a story about real life - bloody, grim, ********, uncensored life. There’s just a few grammatical errors like usage on correct pronouns but does not affect the story. Read at your own risk.

Showtime

Thoko

4.5

80 Chs

Liked by 1 people

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ThokoAuthor

Thanks for Review :)

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ThokoAuthor

I know it is shameless to write yourself a Review and even With five Stars.. But nobody writes anything.. I wrote already the half and its of course Not all open :) I think the half is reached AT 27th of this month.. I hope you enjoy and give me also reviews 😁😁❤️

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Ok the story is not bad at all. It's not for the faint of heart though. The main character has to do what it takes to stay alive and get to where she is now. I was getting a little confused when she was in real time and flashbacks. But great job author.

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NeevximLv14

There was a lot of grammar issues. Some parts were confusing as to what was going on. May want to have a line to differentiate past to present. Overall not too bad. I’m just a little irritated trying to get to the present story. There’s a lot of jumping back and forth from past to present. Although I understand why, I’m trying to get to the main story! Lol.

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It's an interesting start for a novel, although I'm concerned whether you want it past tense or present tense. So far reading into the 2nd chapter, I notice a lot of pauses that shouldn't be there. Your sentence structure should have a nice flow that runs together til the end. (I'm bad too so this is just an *******ish review, sorry!) Emotional description are a wee bit all over but it's an easy fix as you keep writing and playing around with it. Overrall, it's not a bad novel! An exciting starting chapter into the series but remember to keep writing and learning at the same time!

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