Item: Showtime
Rating: 5
Author: Thoko

ThokoAuthor5yr

2019-01-21 23:32

I know it is shameless to write yourself a Review and even With five Stars.. But nobody writes anything.. I wrote already the half and its of course Not all open :) I think the half is reached AT 27th of this month.. I hope you enjoy and give me also reviews 😁😁❤️

Showtime

Thoko

4.5

80 Chs

Liked by 4 people

Replies7

squidsquishLv5

The synopsis is useless. Is this male or female lead? Harem or OTP? I see the genre is Horror & Thriller, so what's that about? Some basic premise would be nice. All I managed to get out of the synopsis is this is just another sexual ******* of a sheep pairing with a deranged jail-worthy rapist CEO/rich jacka$$ that they are selling as romance on this site.

5yr

ThokoAuthor

It is a female lead.. And Well it is about a contracted killer.. But who would read it With such a synopsis.. This one attracted AT least a few people :)

squidsquish:The synopsis is useless. Is this male or female lead? Harem or OTP? I see the genre is Horror & Thriller, so what's that about? Some basic premise would be nice. All I managed to get out of the synopsis is this is just another sexual ******* of a sheep pairing with a deranged jail-worthy rapist CEO/rich jacka$$ that they are selling as romance on this site.

5yr

squidsquishLv5

Well the synopsis read like a sexy fun time, so if I was interested in OTP and female lead I would've come in and expect something sexy. But it's about contracted killer instead so some people might get disappointed and give you a 1*.

Thoko:It is a female lead.. And Well it is about a contracted killer.. But who would read it With such a synopsis.. This one attracted AT least a few people :)

5yr

CelestialCatLv6

Plz write a real synopsis

5yr

ThokoAuthor

Are you happy now? :p

CelestialCat:Plz write a real synopsis

5yr

CelestialCatLv6

Very happy, thanks!

Thoko:Are you happy now? :p

5yr

ThokoAuthor

great :)

CelestialCat:Very happy, thanks!

5yr

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