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AhraManyu
AhraManyuAuthor3yr
2020-12-27 05:40

Right, I had forgotten self-reviews were a thing on this site... Well, well, what can I say? I guess I'm just gonna go through the five criteria given for a review. First of all, compared to my first book, I'm pretty confident about my writing quality. My English is certainly not advanced but it's solid, I think. But don't blame me for missing words or careless mistakes cuz I have the attention span of a... [insert dumb animal here]. The stability of the updates should be pretty consistent in the future if nothing goes wrong with my health. Story development, huh? I'm certainly the only one who can answer that with only two chapters in... Honestly, I'd say you can expect an extensive but linear kind of story development. That's all I'll say. Character design is not my forte, ngl. I can stick to the personalities I create but I sorta struggle to properly express them. But that's just my own take on my own work, you tell me. And finally, world background. To be fair, I'm liking the general picture I have in my head right now. The least I can say is that the world will be big; very big. Might be more than I can handle even. But I'll try. That's it. Oh, and from experience of people answering my review with: "Is this a harem?!" I don't know. I'm not sure. But, in all honesty, I'm probably going to get attached to the female characters so it has higher chances to happen than not. I'll see, you'll see. On this note, peace. ✧/ᐠ-ꞈ-ᐟ\ (I hope I haven't made any spelling mistakes in this shit, I hate that)

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Wanderingforworks
WanderingforworksLv13

I’m excited to read your new book. I read your last one and enjoyed it thoroughly. If there was one thing I hope that you can improve on in this novel is the female characters as they seemed really submissive and weak to the main protagonist. I am going to support this book until the end. I hope you enjoy writing this novel as much as I am going to enjoy reading it.

Tmii
TmiiLv14

Is this r-18 Or nah i see harem?

mistermoon
mistermoonLv3

also how big is the harem

GOD_KING_AQUA
GOD_KING_AQUALv15

One thing i hate is un detailed reviews because that immediately makes it Skeptical on rather I should Read something hope this Is good

Divine_Cabbage
Divine_CabbageLv4

Ooooooo, i finally found your new book, i somehow didnt realize its title was in the authors notes.

Isaac_Fallstrom
Isaac_FallstromLv1

Is this book in the same universe as the last one?

Shadow_Dragon_God
Shadow_Dragon_GodLv13

Domestic Turkey

LO_oT
LO_oTLv11

nc

Aranea_lilium
Aranea_liliumLv4

I'm confused how u is not famous...

MagnuS
MagnuSLv14

You sir ask the important questions

Aranea_lilium:I'm confused how u is not famous...
Aranea_lilium
Aranea_liliumLv4

yea, this website doesn't do justice...

MagnuS:You sir ask the important questions
Matt_pike
Matt_pikeLv5

I have just read the latest chapter and i would like to know when the romance will start. doesnt have to be exact just around.

Shirubafokkusuhime
ShirubafokkusuhimeLv15

Mr. Arthur are you not going to update anymore? why do you try to get my hopes up? why u so mean? when is the next update? you said you'd be back in 2 weeks, I waited too painful long weeks....

ProfessorofCulture
ProfessorofCultureLv14

this book really progresses slowly

DragonGodSmith3000
DragonGodSmith3000Lv14

No lie it’s refreshing to see a non over priced premium original novel! Lol

Shirubafokkusuhime
ShirubafokkusuhimeLv15

three people... maybe more? still find it intriguing that they still fight over his attention for simple things...┐( ̄ヮ ̄)┌

mistermoon:also how big is the harem
FoxOfTheBlueMoon
FoxOfTheBlueMoonLv14

Good but awkward in a sense especially if you read the previous novel to this one and it should be darker and needs more in depth expl anations

ObserverFaker
ObserverFakerLv15

Where can I use ma “Golden Tickets” !!!!! I so in love with this novel man, I wanna support this novel.

Shirubafokkusuhime
ShirubafokkusuhimeLv15

hey!! I need my power boost!!

Shirubafokkusuhime
ShirubafokkusuhimeLv15

hey Mr author I'd like to know what your schedule is for the next chapter???!! why is it taking so long?(ー`´ー)(╥_╥)

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Mitchie_a
Mitchie_aLv15

Overall, the rate of progression is very good. MC doesn't get super strong super quickly but it also isn't slow. Its balanced perfectly so that after you get adjusted to a new skill of his, you are then sitting on the edge of your seat to see how he will continue to progress. Not every increase in power is large, sometimes its just one or two new auxiliary or small skills so you don' have to worry about MC getting crazy evolutions and skills every few chapters. Not only does the MC progress steadily but the side characters too. MC is op but not to the point that its ridiculous. A lot of the reasons he is op is justified and explained when learning about his backstory, and rest you can file under MC luck, because you wouldn't want some average joe Mc. But he is still balanced and has to struggle from time to time. He doesn't get a bunch of skill all at once and each skill is explained in its entirety. The skills themselves are not usable straight away either, MC and the other character need to learn how to use their skills and the different ways to use them on their own, which takes time, so there are chapters where he is just getting used to a new skill are or trying out an different application for a existing one. MC also is climbing floors and gaining levels like a psycho either, if anything, anybody else at his skill level would probably climb floors faster, however that doesn't mean MC doesn't progress. It could be argued that he progresses more when he is not trying to climb floors then when he is. The skills and powers in the story are very unique and there are very very few clichés throughout the story. MC is also very unique in the way he thinks and his personality (both of them) and you won't get bored of him whether your learning about his past, or watching him slaughter hundreds of monsters while thinking about what he is going to do later. The world background is very good, and there are no giant confusing info dumps. We learn just enough to know how the overall of how things work and that the world is very large, but without giving us actual details about a lot of the world until they are relevant for the story or the MC has reached a level where he would learn of it. When it comes to the writing quality it is pretty much perfect, barely any typos and the English is easy to read. When it comes to comedy, it is not overly abundent or forced and flows in with the story very well and will always make you smile from time to time. If I had do give a downside to this story, it is that it isn't as popular as it should be and I want more chapters per week.

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