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CestariaLv55yr
2019-03-19 23:38

If i must be honest, this is a great story and overall it is very good. BUT you ruin it with some racism and this is about religion on top of that so this is ruin all of good point in this story in my eyes. Maybe you're atheist or maybe not, but what if some people mocking your believe your god or your creator as a joke what your reaction? Maybe you're a believer of charles darwin theory or maybe not but please don't make something like that again.

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FrostyNightAuthor

Dude, it's a meme, and it's 2019. Mr. SJW, with your last sentence, are you trying to censor my ******* of speech? I write whatever I want, and if you want to read then enjoy your stay. If not, then go read something else. As ****** as that. No one's writing just for you.

random_weebLv4

yeah get at him bro(sis?) and get back at writing the novel too that would be awesome

FrostyNight:Dude, it's a meme, and it's 2019. Mr. SJW, with your last sentence, are you trying to censor my ******* of speech? I write whatever I want, and if you want to read then enjoy your stay. If not, then go read something else. As ****** as that. No one's writing just for you.
XyroxLv12

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SUBSCRIBE_MY_LISTLv5

I don't think it's fair to react like that over a characters opinion in a book. More over, I didn't even notice something particularly outlandish by today's or even the standards of 10 years ago . You should really get some professional help if you're this easy to trigger. Or move to a place without people and Internet. If one place has a lot of racism it's religion so maybe you should turn atheist or something before you turn i to some fanatic that makes the 5 o clock news with all the people he killed in his conviction. Regardless of what religion you subscribe to. After all Christianity and Islam both are known for their fanatism and holy wars. If you subscribe to another religion than that, it would be nothing different. What's one more crusade right? Against the infidel racists... Seriously man, get some help, youre unhinged as **** if this story triggered you. Probably psychotic as well. If you're not right in the head you're going to do stupid **** you will wish you hadn't in the future and no one, not us, not you or the people you'll hurt are looking forward to that.

POTATOMan2i6Lv13

FUCK YEAH AUTHOR TELL THEM trash sjw cuck

FrostyNight:Dude, it's a meme, and it's 2019. Mr. SJW, with your last sentence, are you trying to censor my ******* of speech? I write whatever I want, and if you want to read then enjoy your stay. If not, then go read something else. As ****** as that. No one's writing just for you.
8EightLv3

this thread is meme tier +1

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