Review Detail of TinyOrc in The Prince Hidden in the Shadows- Fanfic

With a passing grade of 5/10 in mind Word choice: 1/10 Grammar: 3/10 Punctuation: 7/10 Useful Detail: 2/10 Appropriate Tenses: 1/10 Synopsis after 5-minute corrections There was once a boy who was adopted by a newly wedded couple. He realized that his adoptive parents weren't exactly normal. However, by the time he reached the age of eleven, the boy had realized that he has powers that no mere muggle could imagine. If the above corrections in the synopsis don't reveal my reasons for the score, then check out lynda.com for English courses. Keep learning, don't give up!