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Shad
ShadLv65yr
2019-03-06 02:54

the premise of the story is great but as you read it not only the story is slow the fucking premise is missing from the start. advance arsenal system and you got iron dagger and some medieval thing isnt it suppose to be advance arsenal not medieval arsenal. not only did the mc did not buy anything to protect from the bandits who killed his mother right away he just sat and do nothing productive...when i saw the novel i was expecting guns when he reincarnated but not only is the story is slow the mc is like a retard he was caged and didnt think of a plan to escape like he not gonna be killed or something normally any people will think that they will be killed or abuse specially when they keep saying it in your face that your gonna be a pet of a boss who fucking killed a whole village rape its woman and killed then in the most horrendous way

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Darth_Gizmo
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The premise is that it's an arsenal with advanced features that requires "leveling up" in order to get better equipment. The progression is based on materials available. With only things like wood, leather, iron, and cloth at the beginning there's not much that he can make.

SenuOfTheCulture
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Tbh you should put a disclaimer, ya know "advanced arsenal" And guns in the cover ppl will come to read about that. Just put something "no guns right away, it will take some time"

Darth_Gizmo:The premise is that it's an arsenal with advanced features that requires "leveling up" in order to get better equipment. The progression is based on materials available. With only things like wood, leather, iron, and cloth at the beginning there's not much that he can make.
Darth_Gizmo
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I thought it'd be more obvious with the level up part in the synopsis but when I finish the chapter with guns in it I'll add that to the synopsis.

SenuOfTheCulture:Tbh you should put a disclaimer, ya know "advanced arsenal" And guns in the cover ppl will come to read about that. Just put something "no guns right away, it will take some time"
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