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Doomey
DoomeyLv45yr
2019-02-12 23:34

I started out liking the story a lot and the idea of the novel but the further I got into it the less I started liking it for instance why would he not be upset if his mother was brutally killed and he doesnt even want revenge I understand she wasnt really his mom but still thats a little heartless. Than while he is in a cell he starts singing songs from earth like thats not even suspicious and thinks no1 can hear him I mean obviously someones going to be guarding the prisoners. Not even just that when he is running away from the bandits he happens upon two girls and the first thing he thinks of is how to make them my slave/harem members lol cmon this is just ridiculous at this point even if he has balls of steel how would you ask that to a critically injured girl thats mean af and god only knows why she would consider it even if hes handsome theirs some things that just scream rapist. Especially when you consider their age 12 or 13 having *** like cmon. Theirs just too many things that are so wrong I can only see things going from messed up to worse with this development, we have an emotionally distant mc who only cares for *** and a complete coward for not even wanting revenge or even trying to get back at the bandits I can see in the future even him forgiving the bandits and he lives happily ever after with his daughters

Bringing the Advanced Arsenal to Another World

Darth_Gizmo
3.5
128 Chs

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Darth_Gizmo
Darth_GizmoAuthor

At the beginning of the story he's disconnected from the events happening around him and he is a coward. At that point the only thing on his mind is survival and food. He's meant to grow braver as he gains more and more things that he wants to protect. I don't see why the song would be suspicious. The specific song only mentions one place that doesn't exist in that world but most people wouldn't know that there wasn't a place by that name since travel wouldn't be popularized in that sort of civilization except with trading. Thanks for letting me know what you think of the story and for leaving a review.

5yr
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SirPugsilus
SirPugsilusLv4

Variety is the spice of life. Reading is no different.

5yr
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Schwifty
SchwiftyLv13

I agree with the review. The mc is human garbage and the whole story seems like a incel fantasy.

5yr
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VATERLAND123
VATERLAND123Lv1

Wow... heh I would want to say something. If I was in that situation and someone killed my mother. I would like to see them suffer and begging for mercy While I slowly skin them Bit by Bit and make them sit in a hot water for hours, and putting salt water on the injuries I have caused them!

2yr
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VATERLAND123
VATERLAND123Lv1

and maybe send them to the chamber! make them die a painful way!

2yr
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It’s another story where every women open her leg for the main character. Romance and interaction between male and female is absolutely non existent, they meet they fOOk. Personally i find every author that need to put sOx scene in his/her story is belittling his/her ability and demeaning the story itself, a good story do not need that. A little here and there might be needed to show MC affection but sOx scene itself need to be meaningful. For example one come to mind is xenogears (i do not know if any of you reader and author are old enough to remember this masterpiece), it only have one scene but it flow so nicely and complements the character feel. Thus it make fei and elly relationships more “real” not forced. Yeah sure more sOx scene will attract more reader since I am sure that 75% of webnovel reader consist of hormones crazed youth. But do you want your story become a cheap pOOn flix? Well you as the author decide The world have an interesting background, system is non intrusive so thats a plus. Story so far have a good foreboding that also a plus Believable character power progression that also a plus The only cons is this story have too much sOx scene, i think more than 50% of the chapter is either about sOx or main character thinking about sOx. Tl;dr; this story have so much *** scene with demi human, so much that u might as well call this “Having sOx with my kemonomimi in other world.

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Daoist_Erect
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50 chapters in and ONLY a dagger was createdby his supposedly "advance arsenal" MC just literally just bought a **** ton of demi-human slaves to be apparently be a part of his mercenary crew but we all know this would just lead to being part of his harem Story just went to **** when he bought the slaves. The women already part of his harem are just their to be *** dolls, they have no substance and no impact on the story...

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CyberGOD
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EvilMushroom
EvilMushroomLv4

70 chaps and no f*cking gun... And he doesnt even think about it like he's more into sword and other weapons ... He's collecing many 'exotic' girls who he fell in love the first time they met... What's the use of the system? Just change the title author I have read same stories like bringing a badasz weapon in a fantasy world and your story is a let down....yours looks like a novel w/ a badass mc An OP mc but no, nothing really interesting happened The title and cover is totally a trap⊂(￣(ｴ)￣)⊃ CLICK BAIT(๑و•̀ω•́)و(๑و•̀ω•́)و

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NeedMoreMilk
NeedMoreMilkLv5

I felt betrayed. As a lover of guns vs magic novels thi novel kinda sucks..the author must rename the title bringing medieval weapons....what a waste of space.

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AbeLP
AbeLPLv2

Chapter 119. Should tag this as Slice of Life, there is no overarching plot, the characters are the worst(including the mc), his goal is equality but he can’t achieve that as he refuses to do anything about it, author has also somehow made a spineless mc that is still somehow alive in what appears to be an anarchic medieval world. Dropping it before the mc further continue to frustrate me.

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Reader_guy
Reader_guyLv14

I was extremely hopefull at first then for like 10 chapters he does nothing but have *** talk about *** and think about ***. I swear its like watching/reading a ****. Not to mention the fact that the system is so fucking overpowered its annoying. I bet when he does get guns he will just use them to get some more girls for his harem. Just so you know im not a hater I just cant stand this story, and I have read and liked some pretty crappy storys before.

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lauhingprabin
lauhingprabinLv3

When i started reading this I liked it first then when story was progressing it story development got worse like he has his system but why does not he used the arsenal.Mc fuqs everygirl he see come on dude .and why he is not thinking of revenge for his mother and why does not he acts when someone acts towards him .not soo great experience while reading later story

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