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Doomey
DoomeyLv45yr
2019-02-12 23:34

I started out liking the story a lot and the idea of the novel but the further I got into it the less I started liking it for instance why would he not be upset if his mother was brutally killed and he doesnt even want revenge I understand she wasnt really his mom but still thats a little heartless. Than while he is in a cell he starts singing songs from earth like thats not even suspicious and thinks no1 can hear him I mean obviously someones going to be guarding the prisoners. Not even just that when he is running away from the bandits he happens upon two girls and the first thing he thinks of is how to make them my slave/harem members lol cmon this is just ridiculous at this point even if he has balls of steel how would you ask that to a critically injured girl thats mean af and god only knows why she would consider it even if hes handsome theirs some things that just scream rapist. Especially when you consider their age 12 or 13 having *** like cmon. Theirs just too many things that are so wrong I can only see things going from messed up to worse with this development, we have an emotionally distant mc who only cares for *** and a complete coward for not even wanting revenge or even trying to get back at the bandits I can see in the future even him forgiving the bandits and he lives happily ever after with his daughters

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Darth_Gizmo
Darth_GizmoAuthor

At the beginning of the story he's disconnected from the events happening around him and he is a coward. At that point the only thing on his mind is survival and food. He's meant to grow braver as he gains more and more things that he wants to protect. I don't see why the song would be suspicious. The specific song only mentions one place that doesn't exist in that world but most people wouldn't know that there wasn't a place by that name since travel wouldn't be popularized in that sort of civilization except with trading. Thanks for letting me know what you think of the story and for leaving a review.

SirPugsilus
SirPugsilusLv4

Variety is the spice of life. Reading is no different.

Schwifty
SchwiftyLv13

I agree with the review. The mc is human garbage and the whole story seems like a incel fantasy.

VATERLAND123
VATERLAND123Lv1

Wow... heh I would want to say something. If I was in that situation and someone killed my mother. I would like to see them suffer and begging for mercy While I slowly skin them Bit by Bit and make them sit in a hot water for hours, and putting salt water on the injuries I have caused them!

VATERLAND123
VATERLAND123Lv1

and maybe send them to the chamber! make them die a painful way!

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