I appreciate the constructive criticism. I think the *** scenes are necessary for how I plan on developing the character. As for the lack of romance, there's a good reason for it developing this way with the characters so far. I've added hints to help explain why they're happening but later on it will be fully revealed. He will think less about *** as the story becomes more about combat and that begins with the next volume (3). It's hard to explain things without adding spoilers. I can add that the demihumans were created mostly for future combat scenes relying on their unique characteristics. It's not really a spoiler to say that since the Volume Two Information auxiliary chapter I'm working on gives their descriptions anyways. Hopefully you stick around and let me know how you feel about the story's development in future volumes. Criticism is always welcome.

No sOx scene is ever necessary for characters development, its there to add spice and flavor and maybe a plot. It is a bad habit making sOx scene main ingredient of your writings, more than 50% of your chapter include sOx scene or petting. no great author needed sOx scene in his/her book (well unless its a smut book or erotica) it only there to add forebodings, make instant emotional ties or spice things up. For example: At your story mc goes to town, got adopted and without a clear reason the stepmother betrothed her doughter to him, then mc proceed to foOk his stepmother, buy lots of naked female semi human slave, then proceed to fOOk his stepsister plus his stepmother oh and after that does he also fOOk the nun in temple? (I skipped that part after you hinted about soap land service). Totally unnecessary imo, i do not know what plan you have with this event. In contrast lets check a controversial book by john ringo paladin of shadow book 3 chooser of the slain, there exist a female she is betrothed to one of main character vassal, in tradition she must be offered as a tribute for main character feudal right (Droit du seigneur) in exchange he will provide the family with “dowry” to the would be family for her “first time”. Problem is mc fell in love with her thus creating a conflict between lord and vassal, mc is conflicted should he start going “david” with his vassal or not (it’s a good story from the Bible; place the husband of the girl you just ntr’ed in front line so he’ll get killed) and plethora of other ****, in the end so said girl is killed when mc army is ambushed and his supply lines cut off, mc is devastated he shut himself in his caravanserai (castle, and this is in book 4) thus needed one of his subordinates to handle external affairs which almost kill the said subordinate. Is the sOx necessary? Not really but it add spice to the story because without it no emotional link, growth and drama between mc, the female and the vassal will exist. Or maybe even more controversial book the one and only “Lolita”. You can read that by yourself, cause **** happen and it’s pours.but i wont explain it here. As for romance you do not need to put it so big, a little thing like a smile or a helping hands maybe? little stuff like that can properly advance character relationships, heh i fell in love with my gf in motto gp arcade game and she fell when she beat me in street fighter and i screamed nooooo like a little girl again in arcade (yea im sux at fighting game), its little thing that lead to a big thing. you can try and read more book to expand your horizons. But i shall stuck around and see how you develop your character.

fOOk😮? sOx😯?? pOOn😳??? Wtf!!!😂😂😂😂 I almost choked to death 😂😂😂

Censorship at its finest.

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I haven't read the story yet but.... In primitive ages there wasn't anything really entertaining to do.. So fucking was #1 followed by drinking/gossip, and fighting. Mind you for the lowest caste. I'm sure rich people did some reading and calligraphy.

Read it then comment. Never comment without reading first.

Don't need to read a fictional novel to give you nonfictional facts. *Boom* I heard your small brain explode.

Seriously read then comment. After you read the story please tell me again if your little fact is appropriate in the context of my review yes? No my brain is still fine, in fact i feel pity that you feel you have to flex your nonexistent gray matter. Seriously don’t be a douche. If you have to be a douche please do it in the little corner over-there.

Oh and another stuff your fact is plain wrong m’kay? It is very not cool when you decided to be a douche with wrong fact. If you want to know your fact read reputable sources like history book or at least wikipedia not fiction smut yes? https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Medieval_female_sexuality Again if you want to be a douche please do it in that little corner or another place.

Almost all of this applied to harem novel on this site, and it's so true its almost hurt lol

Whoa dude I appreciate your passion, but please ease on that post/repply button..

Lol, sorry bro. My internet was lagging so i though it can't get through...

I got to admit. some people who read this novel will sometime like the book and there nothing we can do about it. and the book is up to the author who decided to do this type of book. so I have no right to judge the book or the author.