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StoneBowl
StoneBowlLv145yr
2019-02-09 09:40

While I was quite invested initially. Over time the book become convoluted and too confusing. There were time-skips/changes which at the time weren't explained well and led to me just skimming the pages, hoping to get back to the story. So while the grammar was good and the story seemed fun, I was just unable to get back into the story and my interests had faded.

Celestial Of The Void

VoidParasol
4.3
63 Chs

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Skully_
Skully_Lv13

LOABA spends far too much time in the inkstone discord. Imagine how many chapters per day he could write if he didn't waste all his time there. You should read this web serial and let LOABA know with a comment on every chapter to spend less time derping and more time writing. Thank you. Skully out.

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Blind_Rooster
Blind_RoosterLv3

Novel idea is rather good, an enjoyable read. I'm pretty much a fan and I hope you're able to update more each day. Like the others, some grammatical here and there but it seems like your first work. Good job! I hope your writing skills improve throughout the story!

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NihilityMadness
NihilityMadnessLv6

Writing quality wise it's still rough on the edges. But definitely a hidden gem on the eyes of the public. As for updating chapters, well not on fast side but you can definitely expect better quality of writing unlike some *ehem!* who just outright post them without even checking it. I know they're on their own but edit them properly. Well for character design and world background, expect a cliches of wuxia and martial arts kinda novel. That is if the author decides to spice things up, not ruin the overall quality of the story. Hopefully, unlike some authors who decides to rewrite the thing. I hope this helps although I know it's not much but hey I aleast gave a proper review unlike trolls who just wants the world burn.

5yr
FredysG
FredysGLv15

Love it +!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!°!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

5yr
licani
licaniLv4

GOOD NOVEL.........................................................................................................................................................................

5yr
Thoko
ThokoLv13

It's easy to read, I don't really know about grammar or such things so I can't really tell if it was bad or good.. sorry for that :D But what I can tell is, that you put a lot of work in writing in it.. so please continue your good work :)

5yr
Jezzekiel
JezzekielLv4

Reveal spoiler

5yr
Micpoll
MicpollLv4

Um dos melhores novel que já lê sinceramente recomendo muito espero que possa ter bastante capítulos seria ainda se aumentar a atualização de capítulos

5yr
Everything_Forever
Everything_ForeverLv14

It was alright until you added romance! Like come on, not every novel needs a harem or love at all! All the people who add romance are just thirsty losers!

5yr
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