StoneBowl

Lighters were invented before matches

By souless, I mean that a lot of his personality seems to have been lost. He’s more robotic in what he does and feels. As for relationships, I include all types (both romantic and friendly). To me, it felt like a lot of these relationships seemed to stagnate and than slowly dissipate over time.

The book drops off part way through and becomes quite boring. The mc reverts any sort of personal development and becomes quite soulless. Also, all the relationships built up are just non-existent now. Very disappointed, especially with how strong this started.

Really great fanfic! Character development has been good, and very high writing quality!

Half the chapters are just notifications for the author’s patreon page.

Interesting fanfic, I’ve enjoyed reading it so far. The grammar is solid and the author seems to be updating this regularly. It feels like the fanfic is still in the setting building phase, and doesn’t yet have any main quest/goal other than getting allies. But there isn’t even 20 chapters yet, so there is still plenty of room to build the plot. I’ve got high hopes, and I’m looking forward to seeing where the author will go with this.

It’s mediocre at best. Not at all worth the read.

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