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lets_get_this_rice
lets_get_this_riceLv105yr
2019-02-07 00:10

The whole kingdom building type novels are far to few in numbers.. And when you find a incredibly well written one with all the other aspects needed to create something equal to pure gold. THATS the day you read this one. The grammar is almost completly flawless. You will only find some VERY minor things somewhere in there. The story is incredibly well written, with both super character design and world building it would shake your brain far to many times as you progress throughout the story. Sadly, there is one flaw..... the slow release. Other than that, I can't find anything which substantially decreased by interest. All the best to you, Author! Keep up the good work!

The Three Realms

Jamison_C
4.6
44 Chs

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SerBlueom
SerBlueomLv5

THIS BOOK IS AMAZING. NO MUCH ELSE TO SAY EXCEPT READ IT YOU DUCKS ———————- 140 hunderd lettee 140 letters i would type 140 letters blau blahf jeo hf jeff Jeff Geoff jet left rift bigs bigot fart nsivvvgg —-___________________________

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MishaK
MishaKLv13

The story is developing nicely. However the only thing I would ask is that you update the chapters at least twice a day! Rest everything is good.

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Nightmare_Taichou
Nightmare_TaichouLv4

This story is amazing! It gave me an RPG feel with the tiers and levels but this story is amazing! Five stars for everything except the world background. While I'm only at chpt. 15, I felt that more could have explained about the fantasy world. But another book to add to my library~!

5yr
StenDuring
StenDuringLv5

Reveal spoiler

5yr
Jamison_C
Jamison_CAuthor

Hi all, Jamison the author here :) Giving myself a 4/5 stars review in all aspects. While I do not believe that 'perfect works' exist, it is my goal to work towards perfecting my craft. Thank you all for reading my work! It is my Raison D'etre. Shout out to Webnovel for granting my feature request :)

5yr
imperfectlyperfect
imperfectlyperfectLv14

The intro is half good. It sheds light on the main character but nothing at all on the world he lives in. So, l have to pick up clues about demonic beasts, superpowers, etc as I go on with difficulty. The prologue should have also introduced me to the realms, where they are, what creatures inhabit them, and so on. Still, its a good if l don't get frustrated because of my ignorance when a new term is used

5yr
90751052
90751052Lv4

The overall world building is stunning considering the number of details placed into the story. Grammar is pretty good and the story flows well. If you want a unique story that actually expands upon the kingdom building, here's your cup of tea. (Honestly, the synopsis doesn't do the book justice since it makes it seem like a generic story of the genre when its not) Keep up the good work, author! >3</

5yr
WWFire
WWFireLv4

The story start up strong, i.e. with MC and other characters straight in a battlefield. What I noticed until this point is that the author decided for "strong character interactions" part at the start of the story (considering the bigger ratio of dialogue:narration). It was not until chapter 6 did he picked up on the "world building" part, which will be revealed slowly as the story go (good point here). Other than that, I have to admit that the writing quality is superb, which also supports the great story flow. But honestly, I don't like how the synopsis had too little content for it as the story doesn't deserve such small info. If you could write such an awesome content, it won't hurt to add a little more to the synopsis. Also, I would like to tell you to be careful on character diversity as it is quite a challenge (imo) in a hierarchic world (i.e. the supporting characters of the lord)

5yr
jikanyotomare
jikanyotomareLv12

the synopsis is very brief, however the story is great. more over the narrative is interesting and pleasant to read. you need to read by yourself to know what i mean. go read it! you will not regret it... author sama please keep going!

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