The story start up strong, i.e. with MC and other characters straight in a battlefield. What I noticed until this point is that the author decided for "strong character interactions" part at the start of the story (considering the bigger ratio of dialogue:narration). It was not until chapter 6 did he picked up on the "world building" part, which will be revealed slowly as the story go (good point here). Other than that, I have to admit that the writing quality is superb, which also supports the great story flow. But honestly, I don't like how the synopsis had too little content for it as the story doesn't deserve such small info. If you could write such an awesome content, it won't hurt to add a little more to the synopsis. Also, I would like to tell you to be careful on character diversity as it is quite a challenge (imo) in a hierarchic world (i.e. the supporting characters of the lord)
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