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Heretoc
HeretocLv44yrHeretoc

Review was written at Chapter 976. After chapter 600 the story slowly goes down in both quality and content. Where, once it was science fiction it's slowly moving into the realm of science fantasy. Where once it was in the realms of possibilities, it's turned into just another modern day system novel where MC is the king. The novel slowly looses it charm. Despite the complex mathematical questions and content, people can eto read it because it was something new. Something fun. How could a simple man turn into a genius through efforts. It even inspired people to study! Now? He's jumping from one mega project to another. One moment he's building a fusion reactor, the next he's sending people to moon using electric propulsion rocket. If that wasn't enough, he's building a space station in moons orbit and a semi settlement on moon. In between he's creating quantum computer and Lithium Air batteries and starting a mine on moon. Plus most of the things makes no sense. he builds a rocket in around six months and sends them to orbit. Six months later he's sending three astronauted to months later they are launching a space station and a month later sending rocket to Mars. Wtf? Are you making Lego pieces? What about tests? What about trials? The author knew his maths. Despite some problems it made you feel that, yes, this is some serious study. But rockets? Author simply puts everything into the background. MC will build the thruster and engine, rest all is outsourced to other companies. Atleast describe it! Where you were once writing chapters after chapters decribing theorms and conjectures, now it's finished ina single para! I have similar problems with his fusion reactor... But anyway. It's now reaching chapter 1000,and we have no character development. He has just become more smarter and has fingers in several pies. His reaction after winning nobel? 'It's okay. ' The MC has become so dull that you need to force yourself to read any further. His relationship? ZERO. It would have been fine if author wantshim to become a wizard. But why do you need to bring our attention to his relationship status every few chapters. He meets his parents, they ask about his marriage and gf. He talks with his his sister, she asks him about gf. He talks with people. Some or the other guy brings marriage and love into the equation. It gets annoying after few times. After chapter 600-650, his practical and theoretical work slowly decreases. You have him meeting people after people, attending one conference after another, one award ceremony after another. We came to read about him and his love for maths. His research. It's fine if author wants to show the after effects, his popularity and how everyone treats him. But it has slowly taken over, what made this story attractive. The guy has been solving a single theorem ( The Riemann hypothesis) for more than 100-200 chapters. It would have been great if author was simply extending it to increase the *******. It would vene make sense, as it is one of the most complex theorem. But nope! Most of the 200 chapters are shown him tinkering with other things, attending conference or him talking with politicians and businessmen. The story is slowly losing its identity. Yes, such things are required to show his growth in social status. But it should have been balanced with his research and study. Now even if he solves a theorem, it barely crosses a chapter or two. Rest 10 chapters are just reactions and discussions. The feeling you got when he solved something is missing. Now it's like...'oh, he solved it. Clap. Clap. Clap. ' Anyway. That's it for now. Cya.

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Daunloco
DaunlocoLv5Daunloco

Good job my friend. You can read this for longer This novel not finished ? Maybe author in ending Will get gf. Just he must to much focus his education sistem. Thanks for you review.

Heretoc
HeretocLv4Heretoc

Just caught up with the raw at chapter 1067.The content matter has slowly improved and his time going and meeting with politicians and businessmen is slowly reduced. We finally maange to see some emotions when his student is treated with *spoiler* disease. +0.5 star.

Heretoc
HeretocLv4Heretoc

Nope, it's probably around one third done. Author has many times dropped hints that LVL 10 is just the beginning. He has yet to reach LVL 10 on all subjects. That with his future research we can assume it will be around 3000 chapters.

Daunloco:Good job my friend. You can read this for longer This novel not finished ? Maybe author in ending Will get gf. Just he must to much focus his education sistem. Thanks for you review.
Joo_Min_Park
Joo_Min_ParkLv4Joo_Min_Park

Wow..

Everdust
EverdustLv4Everdust

The Future is not bright for us readers.

gamma_sheep
gamma_sheepLv1gamma_sheep

I am chinese ,i can tell you that this book is in a critical point at chapter 1093, because most of novel in this website become bored(completely fantasy).But the author now still try to use science theory to explain. I just want to say it is the best book which use theory to explain black technology .

Heretoc
HeretocLv4Heretoc

The current chapter? Seems to be. The algebric and geometric meeting...But if you notice, it was like author just didn't knew what to do after chapter 700. It's like he just went with the flow trying to figure. out something to do or write. Everything became rushed and at the same time incredibly dull... Especially all the meetings. It was only around chapter 950 or something, right after he solved the Reimann Theory, did he get some type of goal. The great thing is that Virtual Reality Arc shows a lot of promise. I just want to know what's after level 10😅

gamma_sheep:I am chinese ,i can tell you that this book is in a critical point at chapter 1093, because most of novel in this website become bored(completely fantasy).But the author now still try to use science theory to explain. I just want to say it is the best book which use theory to explain black technology .
gamma_sheep
gamma_sheepLv1gamma_sheep

now the book in qidian cannot write more about the change in MC country. author can not write more after level 10. unless author use view of total human beings. if you want to see the level 10 science,重生之超级战舰(means Rebirth and became a spaceship)is a better book

Heretoc
HeretocLv4Heretoc

Why can't he write more about his own country? 🤔 Anyway... I will check your suggestion. I have actually tried searching for similar books on Qidian, but the site is so messy... 😅 Plus there are so many books... It's hard to find good ones among all the trash.

gamma_sheep:now the book in qidian cannot write more about the change in MC country. author can not write more after level 10. unless author use view of total human beings. if you want to see the level 10 science,重生之超级战舰(means Rebirth and became a spaceship)is a better book
shahriar_shubho
shahriar_shubhoLv6shahriar_shubho

I'm also up-to-date with latest chapters..... Now he builds a virtual reality system basically in a week time 😐😑😐😑 this book is good but his other book was great 😁😁😁😁😁 tho ending was so suddenly 😩😩😩😩 btw can you recommend me some books like these two books written by this author

gamma_sheep:now the book in qidian cannot write more about the change in MC country. author can not write more after level 10. unless author use view of total human beings. if you want to see the level 10 science,重生之超级战舰(means Rebirth and became a spaceship)is a better book
Lize
LizeLv13Lize

Errr.. sending rocket to mars is nasa project isnt? Not the mc project.. (he only send it to mars to save them because the accident) And they have atleast make preparation for atleast decade.. Its true that they launch the mars program to early.. Because mc creating moon palace.. But true the mc romance is............. Ugh i really angry everytime mc is talking to girl.. 😂🤣😂🤣 And yeah i feel it.. after chapter 600is.. The story go down.. Its like the mc is being controles by the system.. He didnt give himself a time.. I always feel that way everytime the mc said he doesnt have time for girl.. Its like he himself that didnt give him time.. A lot of people have already said that he need vacation.. but nope.. he didnt listen.. 😂🤣 He can wait for like a month.. to collect the system reward.. and do the next mission.. But nah.. he always get the reward in the night or in a few days.. 😂🤣

Heretoc
HeretocLv4Heretoc

Lol true. But as of the latest chapter, the story has improved much. Author has kept what made the story endearing. All the politics and meetings have been kept on side burn or given to that girl. Regarding the Mars thing. I should have explained it more. He sent the rocket to moon and later from there to Mars. How was it even possible? Sending a rocket made for moon mission to Mars. Whether it's the internal environment unit, the storage space or even the 'shower. '

Lize:Errr.. sending rocket to mars is nasa project isnt? Not the mc project.. (he only send it to mars to save them because the accident) And they have atleast make preparation for atleast decade.. Its true that they launch the mars program to early.. Because mc creating moon palace.. But true the mc romance is............. Ugh i really angry everytime mc is talking to girl.. 😂🤣😂🤣 And yeah i feel it.. after chapter 600is.. The story go down.. Its like the mc is being controles by the system.. He didnt give himself a time.. I always feel that way everytime the mc said he doesnt have time for girl.. Its like he himself that didnt give him time.. A lot of people have already said that he need vacation.. but nope.. he didnt listen.. 😂🤣 He can wait for like a month.. to collect the system reward.. and do the next mission.. But nah.. he always get the reward in the night or in a few days.. 😂🤣
Heretoc
HeretocLv4Heretoc

Lol true. But as of the latest chapter, the story has improved much. Author has kept what made the story endearing. All the politics and meetings have been kept on side burn or given to that girl. Regarding the Mars thing. I should have explained it more. He sent the rocket to moon and later from there to Mars. How was it even possible? Sending a rocket made for moon mission to Mars. Whether it's the internal environment unit, the storage space or even the 'shower.

Lize:Errr.. sending rocket to mars is nasa project isnt? Not the mc project.. (he only send it to mars to save them because the accident) And they have atleast make preparation for atleast decade.. Its true that they launch the mars program to early.. Because mc creating moon palace.. But true the mc romance is............. Ugh i really angry everytime mc is talking to girl.. 😂🤣😂🤣 And yeah i feel it.. after chapter 600is.. The story go down.. Its like the mc is being controles by the system.. He didnt give himself a time.. I always feel that way everytime the mc said he doesnt have time for girl.. Its like he himself that didnt give him time.. A lot of people have already said that he need vacation.. but nope.. he didnt listen.. 😂🤣 He can wait for like a month.. to collect the system reward.. and do the next mission.. But nah.. he always get the reward in the night or in a few days.. 😂🤣
10102020oo
10102020ooLv1210102020oo

It could be one of those stories where a random female shows up at the end of the novel.

Ikkarus
IkkarusLv13Ikkarus

What did you expect? That he would still struggle to build rocket and solve math problem in 900+ chapters? Hell that would be boring, in that amount of chapters he should’ve been superman or something OP

VanJosh
VanJoshLv5VanJosh

You can't expect every genius to be like Tony Stark. There is an array of different geniuses with their own character types, this MC is more serious and logical rather than emotional towards approaching every situation. And, when everything is mostly logic you cannot assume that emotions will always play. You do realize his EQ is low?

Heretoc
HeretocLv4Heretoc

The problem here is the way author presents its. As I said in my original post, he brings up the relation, the girl, the possibility of something more and drops it halfway. Above all, his parents, friends, colleagues and even people posting comments will bring this up and either try to matchmake or tease him. It's like author is confused on how to proceed with the relationship tangent. Atleast in the latest chapters he has specifically focussed on the research part of the story.

VanJosh:You can't expect every genius to be like Tony Stark. There is an array of different geniuses with their own character types, this MC is more serious and logical rather than emotional towards approaching every situation. And, when everything is mostly logic you cannot assume that emotions will always play. You do realize his EQ is low?
Aeternabilis
AeternabilisLv13Aeternabilis

Idk im dropping this now cause I feel the mc keeps acting dumb and isnt logical xD the only parts I see he uses his brain is in the calculations. I got to the part where he's finding his friends to help him run his first app... whats annoying is he repeats himself like 20 times saying he doesnt want to be a ceo but still wants money.. like you have an ai.. why dont you use it for once ?? Then he can have the girl help run the meetings etc similar to pepper for tony. Also for now he doesnt even need help once again he has his ai he doesnt use... why doesnt he get it to run his app and help him ? Hows that logical ? From this im guessing these sort of things will happen a lot in the future and thats not my cuppa tea xD

VanJosh:You can't expect every genius to be like Tony Stark. There is an array of different geniuses with their own character types, this MC is more serious and logical rather than emotional towards approaching every situation. And, when everything is mostly logic you cannot assume that emotions will always play. You do realize his EQ is low?
VanJosh
VanJoshLv5VanJosh

Well yah. He’s like that since he began as a normal person who’s horizon (viewpoint) forgets to imagine or think of those things. As I’ve read on the future chapters he’s mostly narrow minded whenever he focuses on a single topic. He never does think on other things; except on “inspirational moments,” but during initiating on the subject’s research he focuses on it 100% and forget the entire wold. Even though he’s smart his knowledge is only applicable on single focuses and cannot be aware one other things. Because of that, other obvious important stuff are ignored by him and even his Social IQ is still pathetic even 1,000+ chapters. He’s bland and like a robot, only to work and research and things on only for himself, ignorant on other human needs. I’m only reading this for the interesting research and sci-fi element of it, and not for the romance and social aspects of it.

Aeternabilis:Idk im dropping this now cause I feel the mc keeps acting dumb and isnt logical xD the only parts I see he uses his brain is in the calculations. I got to the part where he's finding his friends to help him run his first app... whats annoying is he repeats himself like 20 times saying he doesnt want to be a ceo but still wants money.. like you have an ai.. why dont you use it for once ?? Then he can have the girl help run the meetings etc similar to pepper for tony. Also for now he doesnt even need help once again he has his ai he doesnt use... why doesnt he get it to run his app and help him ? Hows that logical ? From this im guessing these sort of things will happen a lot in the future and thats not my cuppa tea xD
VanJosh
VanJoshLv5VanJosh

Well yah. He’s like that since he began as a normal person who’s horizon (viewpoint) forgets to imagine or think of those things. As I’ve read on the future chapters he’s mostly narrow minded whenever he focuses on a single topic. He never does think on other things; except on “inspirational moments,” but during initiating on the subject’s research he focuses on it 100% and forget the entire wold. Even though he’s smart his knowledge is only applicable on single focuses and cannot be aware one other things. Because of that, other obvious important stuff are ignored by him and even his Social IQ is still pathetic even 1,000+ chapters. He’s bland and like a robot, only to work and research and things on only for himself, ignorant on other human needs. I’m only reading this for the interesting research and sci-fi element of it, and not for the romance and social aspects of it.

Aeternabilis:Idk im dropping this now cause I feel the mc keeps acting dumb and isnt logical xD the only parts I see he uses his brain is in the calculations. I got to the part where he's finding his friends to help him run his first app... whats annoying is he repeats himself like 20 times saying he doesnt want to be a ceo but still wants money.. like you have an ai.. why dont you use it for once ?? Then he can have the girl help run the meetings etc similar to pepper for tony. Also for now he doesnt even need help once again he has his ai he doesnt use... why doesnt he get it to run his app and help him ? Hows that logical ? From this im guessing these sort of things will happen a lot in the future and thats not my cuppa tea xD