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Everdust

Everdust

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2018-09-07 JoinedUnited States
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  • Everdust
    Everdust3yr
    Commented

    Didn't Wang Ning already asked for her father to get first picks in the store for the price of bringing Lin Fan to his sister?

    Wang Ning casually said, "Well there's a tournament this afternoon that I wanted to enter with Qing Qing, but we wouldn't have a chance of winning with how strong my pets are, so I want you to take my place."
    altalt
    Cultivation Pet Shop
    Eastern · DXHaseoXD
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  • Everdust
    Everdust3yr
    Commented

    Its perfectly fine as it is. I don't see any problems so far. I can't wait to see more of our mad scientist.

    Ch 18 New Member (Read A/N at the end, please)
    altalt
    Alchemist Chat Group
    Anime & Comics · Bymo
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  • Everdust
    Everdust3yr
    Commented

    Although its a nitpick. Technically creatures above human intelligent can be moved with this wording. Goes into a jumbled mess of what is a creature of human intelligent and stuff, so don't mind me.

    1) Chat Group Gifts: These are gifts that members give to a certain person in particular or share what they have sent with all the group members. But be careful that you have to be quick to take it. As for objects, everything can be sent, money, weapons, special objects, even living beings as long as they do not have an intelligence equal to the human level.
    altalt
    Alchemist Chat Group
    Anime & Comics · Bymo
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  • Everdust
    Everdust3yr
    Commented

    *Redacted*

    *Unnamed*
    altalt
    Marvel: A God's Journey.
    Others · The_High_Father
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