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lucianodsbr
lucianodsbrLv105yr
2019-04-04 01:41

one of the most amazing stories ive read, literally the reason i got into reading light novels.both character and story are uniquely their own.

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achuuuu
achuuuuLv4

"both characters and story are uniquely their own'' You serious?

Joliver123456789
Joliver123456789Lv10

I like that there doing a manga

DaoistGG6kw1
DaoistGG6kw1Lv1

the story is common but have a good concept. but the character development is really lacking here. character like jinwoo is too common in op, fantasy and action story. I don;t know why you call it unique

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