Review Detail of Overlord_Venus in Clockwork Revenant

I don't know if it was my preference but the grammar and sentence structure made it difficult for me to enjoy the story. I suggest you to edit them once. All the mistakes were minor at the most. I'll wait till this had gone through another round of editing before binge reading. The concept is really promising, it has quite the mystery and thriller vibe to it. Notify me once you've edited 😁😁😁