SaintRadience25000

As much as I really enjoy this book, I do have a few criticisms, for one, why does he always enter capital cities and the main cities of his enemies right away, if he's so smart and plays everything as intelligent as possible, why does he always do that? I mean I know the real reason you write it like that, it's because you want him to face off real challenges, but then you write him to be very smart and cautious, especially extremely cautious! Realistically he wouldn't enter his very first capital without at least reaching level 200 and becoming a fully fledged Saint Rank.

So happy this stupid fucking story got dropped, I hope to God it never gets another update ever again!

No, I'm glad he stopped writing, I hope he's done for good, because the story fucking sucks ass! It's not even because it's about ntr, the story just sucks in general, but than again, ntr is pure fucking filth, pure shit, you can't make shit look good no matter how good the writing and dialogue is.

How about go fuck yourself you fucking cuck.

This story is absolute trash, of course it's NYr ntr is always going to be fucking trash, but the Grammer in this story is atrocious, the author can barely comprehend English so the writing as a result is terrible, like in here, he writes stuff like "he held her panty" like what even is that? That's not even English, the dialogue is absolute shit, I've never read a dialogue more abysmal, they don't even talk like actual people. So the story, the premise, the dialogue, the spelling, it's all God awful, dreadful, the author should really just give up writing because he can't write a story to save his own ass. And all of this is just from writing alone, that's not even talking about the story itself, the story makes no sense, the goddess is pure evil and more like a fucking demon, this author really loves to make himself suffer, seriously author, you should be eaten by Armin the cannibal if you love suffering so much, you piece of shit!

This book is absolutely fucking lame, the MC is a dumbass who isn't trying to learn about his new situation, he just let's people continue to fuck his wife and while I'm glad he's getting some action too, this story overall just fucking sucks.

I'm not checking back till the MC reaches the five year mark, this story obviously sucks, but my hope is that the MC will get revenge and will absolutely make everyone suffer, it's clear he's putting up with it till the five years are up, especially based on the description. So I'm not going to waste my time with this pathetic story till after the MC becomes OP and gets his revenge, that description better not be a lie damn it!

there's nothing courageous about this story, it's completely and utter trash, the author is complete trash, he needs to keep his damn fantasies to himself, cause this trash doesn't belong here!

How can he do his best if the author likes being cuckolded, doing your best means being great, being better, cuckold is the complete opposite of all that!

absolutely horrendous, disgusting, this author truly is a degenerate who just loves to torture himself, a masochist that actually enjoys emotional pain, I'm so happy he's on hiatus and hasn't uploaded for over a year, I hope to God he doesn't ever upload again and keeps all these fantasies to himself.