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ValvenLv65yr
2019-07-02 00:58

Sorry, my review is pretty bad. I read this and wasn’t laughing at all. I don’t dislike the writing and it gets pretty hectic at times. I don’t see this as hilarious and I find myself wondering why everyone laughs at some parts. I don’t get it. The story is okay, well- written, cliched and epic. But to me, the comedy is non-existent. If you are looking for laughs, I cannot guarantee you will. - In terms of the types of reviews I’ve seen the average triple ratio is 90% found it funny/refreshing. 5% found it not hilarious. 5% is other.

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LANANKURAS
LANANKURASLv15

Probably faked up jokez on which only retards laugh.

Shadowles_Immortal
Shadowles_ImmortalLv14

I liked your review since it put some cons and pros instead of doing what he^ did of just saying if I don't find it funny anyone else who does is a retard. Apparently he doesn't know that everyone has a different funny bone.

Legio9
Legio9Lv10

Yup

Muhai
MuhaiLv6

Everyone have their own opinion your review was wonderful and not one sidely👍

Mujaki
MujakiLv11

I read 17 chapters and dropped. yeah I suppose it could be funny but maybe googles text to speech ruins the jokes.. just seems to be an endless misfortune to me. I admit it is a bit different which is a definite plus but its still too cliche for me to enjoy it.

Kriti_Bhargava
Kriti_BhargavaLv4

Thanks for helping me out with your review and I really agree with u

Kriti_Bhargava
Kriti_BhargavaLv4

Thanks for helping me out with your review and I really agree with u

Kriti_Bhargava
Kriti_BhargavaLv4

Thanks for helping me out with your review and I really agree with u

Neadless
NeadlessLv12

I guess it depends on the readers age, state of mind or many other factors. I fall into the tired, cynical and "i know i'm older than you and therefore i know better" category. Terry Pratchett is hilarious, this not so. Somewhat entertaining though.

JonToBreak
JonToBreakLv5

For me was funny, jokes and situations here aren't for everybody.

Mavis_Crise
Mavis_CriseLv1

Hi

Kriti_Bhargava:Thanks for helping me out with your review and I really agree with u
Mavis_Crise
Mavis_CriseLv1

Hi

Neadless:I guess it depends on the readers age, state of mind or many other factors. I fall into the tired, cynical and "i know i'm older than you and therefore i know better" category. Terry Pratchett is hilarious, this not so. Somewhat entertaining though.
Mavis_Crise
Mavis_CriseLv1

Hi

Mavis_Crise:Hi
Mavis_Crise
Mavis_CriseLv1

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RUE_12
RUE_12Lv12

Lol it's so funny that 2 ret*rds broke into his house and cook his soon to be dragon pet XD I think they eat it in the next chapter. The best part is that he mad for like 1 second and just let it slide.

Cravien
CravienLv3

My review is worse..

Jack_Priper
Jack_PriperLv6

Bru, that hurt even me. I didn't laugh, I did however admire how they made sure to not waste anything. I stopped liking the twins though.

RUE_12:Lol it's so funny that 2 ret*rds broke into his house and cook his soon to be dragon pet XD I think they eat it in the next chapter. The best part is that he mad for like 1 second and just let it slide.
Mariam_Kanda
Mariam_KandaLv1

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Almighty_Chaos
Almighty_ChaosLv3

I personally dislike the MC for not being able to stand firm for himself.. to me I doesn't seem like comedy but rather a disappointment, when his system is supposed to be God of War system The MC can be so childish and stupid sometimes that I scorn him my personal opinion though other's opinion might differ🤷‍♂️

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