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Cravien

Cravien

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  • Cravien
    Cravien22 days ago
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    I tried to be fair. But the author needs to touch grass. 3days to come up with ab additional software programm? no one can code that. and if someone did, they deserve to be a laughingstock. This should be called "author makes up reality as he goes" Also "all enemies turn dumb when they meet the protagonist" or "i never knew money grew on tree and the rest of the world was useless" The only good thing is the speed at which the author can put out nonsense. An AI could have written this and made more common sense.

  • Cravien
    Cravien6 months ago
    Posted

    i wanted to rate this down to one star.. However - i am not sure i should. Termites are not ants. The introduction is willy nilly and before u comfortable with the world background they just spring random unnatural behavior on you. If you enjoy chaos go ahead.

  • Cravien
    Craviena year ago
    Replied to Nikhil_Chand

    ... for not main characters this is harem. the only main character is still " too innocent" but mostly this is about ascension

  • Cravien
    Cravien2 years ago
    Posted

    no depth, no complexity, yes and no story line, plot armor, almighty narrator, everything only for the MC, no consequences, the world has no rules just like it doesn't look like anything and you wouldn't notice the difference between a palace and a hut.

  • Cravien
    Cravien2 years ago
    Replied to EternalNightLotus

    where are you.. are you okay?

  • Cravien
    Cravien2 years ago
    Posted

    ... i am simple... break the story and everything is crap. A teenager suddenly turning 18. within a year. shes 15 going to school for one year, not finishing that term and then she is turning 18. so... no.b

  • Cravien
    Cravien2 years ago
    Replied to Little_Xi

    did you also miss him gaslighting her, raping her, always condescending her. i dont. still u leave a review Like that, like its natural to have a ceo baby.. throwing tamper tantrums and playing with peoples live. i hope you don't ever meet such a man .. it would be hard to not kill oneself.

  • Cravien
    Cravien2 years ago
    Posted

    Stockholm syndrom lead female gets bullied by baby ceo with abandonment complex for no reason oh not my gift? - temper tantrum oh i broke our agreement ? - not my fault i dont like you to know my wife, but you already working with her, so i am bot gonna tell you its my wife although you are my brother she can't be approached, but he can be all the time and she doesn't need yo know to not make it worse, but she can't have friends or work without having to have s** with him yo appease him is supposed to bear his children, but hes not even treating her anything else but like a sex toy, just splurging now and then like you do to a mistress. all other women get more thoughfull considerations like they are human but not his wife. If I don't go home to break you heart, i am not Gu Jingze

  • Cravien
    Cravien2 years ago
    Commented

    so the reality show gets a full week of filming... but everyone just stayed for one night and no one did actual filming but arriving and holding a press conference .. also.. the event concludes with Lin Xhe getting out of bed falling into a broken dress and the day is over? uhhh.. I don't get why everyone is so excited about such big plotholes .. are you all as smart as Lin Che, that you wouldn't know when you are taking advantage off?

  • Cravien
    Cravien2 years ago
    Posted

    This is a shameless review for author-chan. After spending a depressing time in not finding any novels actually good enough, but calling themself gold, i am back to see how thing have developed I realised i was too stingy. Theres lot to criticize ... but its trivial. Compared to other novels there are bo major plotholes, character deviations or half assed world building. This is an improofing author. Should write novels forever. :X from a person to harsh on herself