Review Detail of Chrissy239 in Rise of Myriad Magic Emperor

Item: Rise of Myriad Magic Emperor
Rating: 3.6

Review detail

Chrissy239Lv154yrChrissy239

This novel has a ton of potential but sadly is held back by a ton of grammar issues that makes it look like it was translated by a machine. If the novel was rewritten with proper grammar and some of the sentences were revised to flow more easily then this would be a 5 star book. Another problem is that dialogue comes in the middle of paragraphs and is not separated when different people start talking making it hard to follow. The sex scenes are terrible and impossible to understand while having an unnecessary amount of cussing.

Rise of Myriad Magic Emperor

Evernightlord

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EvernightlordAuthorEvernightlord

Well it's getting edited and is done till Ch24.

4yr

EvernightlordAuthorEvernightlord

Well it's getting edited and is done till Ch24.

4yr

EvernightlordAuthorEvernightlord

As the premium chapter are getting edited. The editting of old chapters are delayed.

4yr

EvernightlordAuthorEvernightlord

As the premium chapter are getting edited. The editting of old chapters are delayed.

4yr

EvernightlordAuthorEvernightlord

I don't know that you are trying to say when you say unnecessary amount of cussing in sex scene. I am not using slang language or cursing someone here. The fact is I have never used any slang language in the novel till now. Or are you want to say words used have two verbal meaning.

4yr