Chrissy239

really is too bad it died, was fun reading what was there

not updated in more than a year, and a year again before the previous update, most likely dropped

While this fiction is a fun read lots of it is disconnected and hard to follow, paragraphs suddenly end and another plot point is followed only for that plot to stop and another to start in a very jarring way. This has also not been updated in a year so in my opinion may as well be considered dropped.

I gotta ask, did he ever enable death? or is it technically on by default because he is in an "irl" situation

grammar desperately needs fixed, it completely ruins what could have been a great FF.

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This one is probably abandoned, hasn't been updated since 2017. Read through it either way and is quite good, if a bit confusing sometimes in explanations.

this one sounds like it could be entertaining but the horrid grammar is just a massive turn off.

Where in the world did this awful name then colon for people talking come from it wasn't done in the beginning. Honestly don't understand how people can read it, throws me off...

Yes, a better reference would be when they are talked about in avatar the last Airbender, they are all in the same locations and opened in similar ways, as well as meaning similar things.