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Comicontagious
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2018-12-10 19:13

Overall I really enjoy the writing style of this author, it being first person really hits home to me! The way he pulls you into the MC and leaves mystery in the first chapter gets high praise from me . Looking forward to new chapters once you've outlined this well!

N°1: The Saga of the Emptiness Harbinger: The Beginning(old version)

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