Item: Marvel Invincible Talisman
Rating: 1.4
Author: AsianLadyBoy

AsianLadyBoyLv136yr

2019-02-21 17:53

I cant read this no more. The mc is so retarded and brainless. He keeps doing stupid decisions over and over again i just cant take it anymore. And the MC is supposed to be that way. So if you like retarded dumb MC's that keep making stupid decisions that make no sense. Other then maybe to piss off the readers. Then you will like this fanfic. But if you like even some what smart MC's that think before they act then this is not for you. I think this MC has some learning disabilities.

Marvel Invincible Talisman

yassinose

4.0

121 Chs

Liked by 14 people

Replies4

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I APPROVE

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Hey, you looking...Beautiful. Eugh, nice to meet you. And thanks for the warning.

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BIG TRUE

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