Review Detail of DaisukiDayoSenpai in Sweeter than Fiction

I don't know what happened during the three years but your writing style is nice with little to no error. You've certainly improved and it shows in your writing. One small thing though— and I think you're planning to change it later— is your book cover. It's fine, but it will garner more readers if it's eye-catching. Also, no one has probably said it but congrats on overcoming a portion of your life and getting past your writer's block. Those two are a real pain if you ask me but at least you got over it ^-^