Author did great in expressing characters' thoughts and actions. There are some bit of errors but is still understandable. Hoping for more in the future. Good job Author and good luck!😊
The story is a page-turner. It is interesting in its own way. You did great Author. Although there are some misspelled words, it can be passed as typos so, overall, it is such a great story. Good work!😊
This story is promising, it has a lot store in it, making you curious and crave for more. Although there are missing punctuations like commas, still, Author did good. Great work!😊
The plot is great but it needs room for improvement. There are redundant sentences, I hope in the future, Author will have the time to fix them. Still, you did a job Author😊
I love this kind of tropes even though they are common, still, Author did great in executing the plots well. Will read in the future when I have all the time. Great work and good luck!😊
The story is great it will leave you wanting more. There are only small errors but it still readable and understandable. Great work Author and good luck!😊
The progress of the story is quite stable but there are inconsistencies and there are sentences that are confusing. Also, I hope the grammar can be improved in time. Still, Author did good!😊🧡