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I have read your work until Chapter 26 and here is my review that reflects my thoughts about your writing Writing Quality - No complaints there. You seem proficient enough in English which is a plus in my book. Atleast, I don't have to keep correcting the tenses or verbs as I read. Thank God for that 🙂🙂 Stability of Updates - This doesn't matter to me much since sometimes a writer needs more time to flesh out the details. I myself sometimes scrap the overall first draft and start anew with a different plot/mindset in some chapters. Also, as a voracious reader myself, I had rather have the author concentrate on quality than quantity. Story Development - The story started off with gruesome things happening to the MC. Being sold off to a brothel by your mother just because your father couldn't keep his hands off you might leave a person physiologically imbalanced. With the first chapter, it becomes clear that it's not going to be a slow dragging process which sets the pace nicely but at times it's too fast and leaves the reader lagging behind with their mind stuck on something else. Character Design - The author doesn't fall into the quagmire of the stereotypical characters which is a plus. On the other hand, I feel the author can work a bit more on it and add a bit more gravitas to their thoughts and future development. World Background - Hmmm.... Maybe the author should work a bit more on this but that might just be my own preference and other readers are fine with the way things are. Hopefully, this review will help the author and they won't come with lit torches and sharpened knives at me while being asleep. 🙂🙂🙂

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My Way To You

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Lol thanks, yup world development... Ugh I gotta work on that. Thank you for the review, it was great😀