First Arc: "Don't leave me! Just look at me and stay awake!" Words that haunted Ariana's dreams for as long as she remembered. Dying in the arms of her lover as they both are surrounded and engulfed in flames. However Ariana's quirks never stopped her from living her life. Her journey starts from when her adoptive mother sells her at the tender age of 12, afraid that she was stealing her adoptive father's love. A blow to her head unlocks her past life's memories and life skills. Any object she touches relating to her past life unlocks her past skills and education. Using her memories she changes the brothel she's sold to into a maid cafe, and slowly changes her community. While creatures called Lumas are born from her powers to protect Ariana but who are the Lumas really protecting? Especially when she gets her period on her 13th birthday and it morphs her into a humanoid garnet dragon. Second Arc: In a world full of magic, beast men, warriors, adventurers and elementals could there really be something more frightening then a girl with mixed blood? Garnet dragon, child of the jewel eyed priestess and the soul of someone who was summoned from Earth. Ariana is fully awoken to who she is and has started her life in St. Verusha Academy as their perfect score student. She will have to grow into the young lady she wants to be while trying to unravel the mysteries of her life. With the help of Cayden, her childhood friend and the the Lumas, Ariana will discover the roads she can walk down. The only problem is will she choose destruction or human evolution? Love or world dominance? Revenge or forgiveness? Or will she allow her human mind and heart to be devoured by the darkness inside of her because of a massive betrayal from the one person she thought meant the most to her?
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A mask of pain. A wall of sadness and loneliness that nobody could understand. "It's futile to explain, the moment something goes outside the norm, people instinctively push you away." Her pain and sadness is only a burden to those she cares about. He hides behind a wall, a long wall nobody can climb. Terashima Lila entire childhood revolved around staying strong for her family and friends. Music was her means of escape. A means of conveying the deep feelings and emotions in her heart that she couldn't convey normally. But when her cursed bloodline separates her from everything she built the past sixteen years of her life, and singing slowly degrades her condition further - what will Lila do? She transfers to light academy under a new name 'Kiku Ari,' and she meets him. The one person who changes her life completely. A unique music romance novel that focuses on a single girl's journey and burden behind being the top idol. Join Lila on her journey to achieve her new dream, while struggling with her hanyou lineage and getting caught up in a triangular romance. To achieve her dream, what will she sacrifice? What will change? For her, the two of them were both equally important. Which hand will she take? ___________________ ------------- *CURRENT COVER - [Cover by: Zushidraws] Join me on discord: https://discord.gg/9Cwt9Jz Updates: 2-3 Chapters every day the first 80-95 chapters are old content which I'm still going through and re-editing. - A side note regarding the story: the first half of the story will focus on the second ML Karashima Haruka and the female lead Terashima Lila story. Then the second half will move back to the first ML Austin Kiryu ---- Genre: Music, Romance, Fantasy. Supernatural
She went to a place she shouldn't visit. She took the path she should not have taken. And… She loves someone she shouldn't love. ******** She was sent to him to retrieve the information, but her fate twisted when she fell for him... *******SNIPPET******* "Luna." She said. The girl’s eyes were so captivating that Xiao Tianyao couldn’t be able to draw his attention away from her, as though something was sucking his soul. “Beautiful…” He kept repeating the same word in his reverie. “… All the palace people from the Kingdom of Xinghe will be sentenced to death.” The eunuch added some information before he ended the decree. Afterward, the soldier from before stepped forward and was about to grab Luna’s hand with intention to drag her away, however, surprisingly Xiao Tianyao held his hand before he could touch her. “Stay away from her.” Xiao Tianyao said coldly. With puzzled expression he inquired his General action. “But, General… the decree said we have to kill her.” “I want her.” He said with finality. “But, Prince Xiao Tianyao your action is against the Imperial decree…” The eunuch retorted. Xiao Tianyao didn’t say anything anymore when he helped Luna to stand up, ignoring all of the questioning eyes as he walked away with her in his embrace. Xiao Tianyao unexpected attitude baffled everyone who were presence there. *** “Prince Xiao Tianyao decision can’t be justified.” The Eunuch mumbled. “All of you retreat for now. I will try to talk with The Prince. Leader Feng Chang, follow me please.” Both Feng Chang and the Eunuch rushed into the palace hall to the direction of the Emperor of Xinghe’s room that Xiao Tianyao had occupied. When it was only the two of them, mocking smile appeared on their lips. “Inform to the Emperor that Young Miss Luna will handle it beautifully.” Feng Chang said as he slow down his pace. “Young Miss Luna ability is simply unimaginable.” The eunuch announced it in amazed. He had heard about the mind controller ability to mess with other people mind, but never saw it with his own eyes. Only when he saw Xiao Tianyao was so beguiled by Luna, he knew that the mind controller’s ability was a calamity for their enemies. Feng Chang didn’t say anything when he saw the eunuch gloated face. ********************************************* ##Meet me on instragram : jikan_yo_tomare Disclaimer : cover picture is from pinterest.com Check out my other stories: **PURPLE DUSK TILL DAWN: dearest through the time **The Love of a Lycan
SYNOPSIS 1: Due to the victory that he yielded to the country Crown Prince Kalki turns arrogant or he is that since birth? None can even have a word with him except one person. The Emperor! Emperor Philips! Alas! He is in death bed now! Due to the grave injuries caused by the war, he couldn't hold the country's responsibilities anymore. During his times in death bed he remembers something which he forgot for a long period of time. For about 15 years, one thing that he regretted in his whole life. After all he named his own son after the death of his only best friend's influence. The friend who saved his life once fortunately. But The Emperor didn't get any chance to help him. He recalls his friend had an adorable daughter. Emperor Philips calls his most trusted Servant Victor. He asks to write his last will come Edict. The Crown Prince without any another words travels towards the country that his father mentioned. Hindustan! The Country of Spiritual Powers! He always wondered why his father-A devotee of Jesus Christ would name his son of a Hindu God-to-be-incarnated?!. Moreover. . Who wanted a common girl with A Curse and from a different country as Crown Prince's wife!? However.... Who would have thought? The abandoned newly 'wedded' wife would qualify herself The Country's Respectable Empress!? A Cursed Empress actually. -------- SYNOPSIS 2: Witness the Battle between The Three Headstrong People who forbid to give up until they attain their desired destiny! They would make their fates to lie under their feet just to change the predefined destiny! Not to mention their hardships and heartbreaks through the journey! Will they succumb to the fate? Would the heartbreaks twist their desired destiny? Get ready to enlighten yourself....What actually Love is... (According to Hateera??) --- The cover of the book is just taken from bing and edited. My works: 1. The Devil CEO and Fairy Teacher - Completed (Editing under progress) 2. The Commoner Consort : The Country's Respected Empress - ongoing. 3. Dear Me - Poetry (Only in wattpad as it was for some contest). 4. Withering Heart: Bracing My Broken Pieces (New) --- You can find me on Instagram @hateera_the_darkwhite Twitter @Hateera_Writer Facebook @Hateera
Update: 3 times per week What would you do if you woke up as an infant in a jungle-like world? The original envy of the world was reincarnated as an infant, child to a tragic couple. At the young age of 13, she was sold off by her self-proclaimed “biological” father. A useless beauty with no cultivation. But alas, it would be the biggest regret in their life. Those who once looked down on her shall recieve her wrath. “Unfilial? So what? Why should a courtesan care what others say?” The jack-of-all-trades prince follows her around and pampers her so much his monogamous parents are embarrassed for him. But is she really as simple as she seems? This former envy of the world, just what could she be hiding in her past? Why does she sometimes have such empty eyes? Such low self-esteem in front of him? And, if she is a virgin, how can she be so knowledgeable about what goes on between couples?! Author's Note: Like the new cover? DM Kiz#4961 on Discord and tell him how much you like it! Please don't be mean if you don't like the art or style, he took time out of his busy schedule to draw the cover and even gave it to me for free! Please be appreciative of the hardworking, creative people!
Annie had never thought of what they were undertaking In the light. Despite all her Romantic fantasies, she had never really believed she would find a husband at any of the season's entertainments. She had already found her champion and, ridiculously romantic or not, she knew she would never want any other.....! A TWIST OF FATE... Major Ian Sinclair never expected to be named anyone's guardian. And especially not of the young woman whose father was responsible for ending Ian's career and very nearly his life. But war made men do strange things, and now Anne Darlington was his responsibility. A very attractive responsibility. ~------------------~ Fate thrust Annie Darlington into the strong arms of Ian Sinclair, a tortured nobleman. But his secret connection to her father threatened her unspoken dream that Ian would someday return her LOVE... ___________ Synopsis: "If she's your Stormy opposite, tenderness will bring her to your bed. —Hunk Jarek Stepnov on woman-hunting. Nestled between Jarek's black satin sheets was a beautiful stranger, but she was way too sexy to be Goldilocks. The mystery woman revealed herself as Leigh Van Dolph, a tigress seeking a stake in his family's territory! Jarek knew just how to thwart her—bring the sleeping beauty to his bed again... This time for the ultimate loving. But the lady exec turned the tables on Mr Temptation, for their intimacy summoned a primitive, powerful need for a woman all his own... ________ "What are you doing in my bed?" Panic flattened Leigh to the mattress. "You sleep here?" "Sometimes," the man's deep voice rumbled. Dressed only in her bra and panties, Leigh hitched the black satin sheet over her bare shoulder. "You really should have taken everything off," he whispered. "To better enjoy the sheets. They're the finest quality." "I'm here on business. I didn't mean to fall asleep. I was locked in here and thought I'd take advantage of the..." "You are in my bed. We have slept together." Leigh swallowed tightly. "You sound as if... You know, we've been intimate... And that isn't true." He shifted slightly and something she didn't understand slammed against her, taking her breath away. The massive bed seemed to slant, nudging her toward him on an erotic wave of satin sheets. Discord: JoannaAngel05#6579 Server: https://discord.gg/sPJ3yyj
"Leave my house, this instant!" The old woman screamed and pushed her out. Diana was shocked. Yes! Everyone hated her for looking ugly and if there's one person that dote on her, then it's this woman. Her grandma. She was told to never show up in her hometown and only get to see the woman when she visited, once in a while, but work brought her here and she was excited to drop by and enjoy her grandma's warmth. But that's the response? She felt devastated. It felt like everyone was against her now. Her parents and twin sister treated her like the stain in the family and her only source of confidence to show that someone still cares, just chased her away. She was shunned by the society for her look, yet it never broke her. She has replies to every insult you could ever pass on her. She was strong and tried to be on her own. If you let her be, then you will never know how stubborn she was, but that exact day, things change. ….. Her life was wanted. Her real birth mother resides in that same town and was enduring a marriage to a dangerous man, just to keep the man from learning that Diana lives. That her baby didn't die. He wanted to erase the link that connected his woman to another man. He's obsessed with Diana's mom and wanted her for himself alone. Diana's real father was still in a coma because of this man and Diana just delivered herself to him. She was still feeling hatred towards everyone as she left her grandma's place, not knowing that she was followed there and the woman had been abducted immediately when she left. She decided to stop giving a damn about everyone. …. Then she saw him. It wasn't really him, but looked like him. The twin brother of the man that she had started to like. He told her the previous day that he would be leaving the country to search for his brother, but Diana had no idea that she's now looking at the brother that he went to search for. She thought he lied to her. She thought he said that to make her disappear from his line of sight like most people do. He was also a very dangerous man, and Diana's next action piqued his interest. She was furious and decided to let out her frustration on someone, not having any idea how she just saved herself, because she was still being followed. The guy, who was the head of an assassination organization ended up detecting that someone was following her. Seeing how Diana mistook him as his brother, he decided to look into it, because his brother wasn't the type to get close to women. Diana, who was knocked out to calm her, woke up to hear the story of how her grandma was rescued half dead by the people from the organization. Her real life story was told to her on that same day and she got a proposal to become an assassin. Not only would she stay safe from the man that would do everything to kill her, she could come back strong, get her revenge and save her mother from him. She could be happy with her family again and be with Ethan, her love. support me by buying me a coffee: https://ko-fi.com/may1st join the server link: https://discord.gg/Q7tY3F8
Betrayed by her boyfriend and best friend, Lee Jinhee found herself being heartbroken, and due to her impulse, she got into an accident, leading to her death. But fortunately for her, she was provided with a second chance! Lee Jinhee found herself being satisfied with it! However, what the hell had happened in this life of hers? Why was her best friend and boyfriend acting so strange? Hold on! Why was her best friend, Han Taehee, acting so clingy? Why was her boyfriend, Kim Jaehyun, the one chasing after her this time around? Why was they paying this much attention to her this time around? However, despite the weird changes, Oh Jinhee was determined to make those who had wronged her in her previous life pay!
Meet Lila, she an outspoken orphan who lives on a planet that's about the end. Born to stay in the background by the people who abandoned her and friends who betrayed her. Lila wonders if her fate really is to just die. But second chances do come to those need so what do you say Lila? "Sure, what the hell!? I like to be born again." Hopefully her life will be much longer this time. *Please note, I am revising the previous chapters, I know they are hard to read LOL. Special thanks to all the readers who pushed through the chapters, and read the story anyway.
For countless years, Lia has chased after her unrequited love and even helped him to become the Ghost King yet what awaited her? Nothing but betrayal, the murder of her family, her own sacrifice, tossed into an abyss to die and to be revived over and over again. Her endless love turned into bottomless hatred. Everyone who has wronged her and her family will suffer an unimaginable fate. Revenge against the mightiest being in the immortal world, the Ghost King? No problem, I'll carve a path and become the king myself. I'll raise an army of undead against your army of ghosts. So, rise my loyal followers, march with me into a war full of slaughter, blood and despair. Tear down the Ghost King along with those who dared to harm me and build a throne for me out of their bones and flesh. ------- Yano: Very well, my wifey wants to take on the whole immortal world. I will tear it down for you. Lia: I can do it myself. Just leave. Yano: No!! Wifey!! ------ Updates Monday- Thursday Romance is not the main focus of the book, there will be romance later on in the story but more as a subplot. Also, check out the trailer I made for this novel on youtube just for fun: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eLoQu27FZpM or type in wicked reincarnation- trailer Disclaimer: cover artwork does not belong to me. All credits to the rightful artist.
Keeping the 3 words a secret is the best choice for them... Confiding their feelings with each other felt like a distant dream.... She has a trauma and shadow and he has his own skeletons in the closet..... Will their love for the other stand against the harsh passage of time....? It was supposed to be a cliche prince and princess love story, bt what went wrong? She closed her heart 'back then' and since then, her life has been monotonous. The only colour in her life is him but that colour is bound to stay in a canvas....she can't be selfish and ask him to colour her life as well... He is the CEO and she is his personal assistant.... Let's follow them in their story of life and love..... A certain CEO selling meng: "LinLin, they forced me to drink even though I said....I said that I don't want to ba." Our overbearing PA (pats his head while calling the secretary office) Call connected--- "Make sure to keep all the meetings scheduled with Chairman Zhou and Chairman Zhang over lunch, alright?", saying this she hangs up. The CEO hugs her tightly: hehehe, thank you linlin....love you the most. THUMP THUMP THUMP Our great PA irrespective of her wildly beating heart replies a "hmm", with a slight smile. Atsuki's Note: Hello, fellow species!! hehehe 'CEO Romance' novels are quite famous, right? So, I'm trying my hand with one..muhahahaha The names are in pinyin, I've been into CN novels these days so, they got stuck. But this has no connection with anything alive or..blah blah blah...in short, it's just a light read. Please try to enjoy it as it is and treat it as a fantasy of mine. I like to ramble a LOT and they go into , you can ignore them if you want. Happy Reading!! Discord: https://discord.gg/5J3xdvr ........................ PS. Cover doesn't belong to me...found it on @pinterest and tweaked it...hehe
Explore the story of a reborn woman who unleashes the Dark God and hilariously tries to tame him into her younger brother. A modern woman is transmigrated to a young girl's body in the world of magic. Due to the circumstances going out of her control, she releases the dark god who is only 11 years old boy with no memory? To keep herself alive, she has decided to make him love her as his older sister. With a spirit beast who likes to eat his problems and a seer who seeks her spirit beast, she traverses through realms while the dark god wonders how to get his heart back. ----------- Author's Note: It is not easy to tame a god. The story is supposed to be an easy read. Throw away logic while reading this. Genre: Fantasy/Adventure/Romance/Comedy/NSFW/R+/Mature Cover credit: Photo by Shane Devlin on Unsplash --------- Instagram: Nim_Norah Twitter: Nim_Norah Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/kochnorah Buy me a coffee ~ Ko-fi.com/norah_koch ---------- ****Full list of my novels******* Novels with Interconnected Worlds: 1. The Love That Remains (Completed) 2. His Mischievous Time-Traveler: How to capture a celebrity husband? (Completed) 3. His Devious Harbinger: How To Tame A Wicked God? (Completed) 4. Supernatural Investigation 101: Chronicles of Nakashima Wakana 5. When A Ghoul Falls In Love 6. Hunting for a Husband in a Vampire Apocalypse Standalone Novels: Her Wicked CEO: How To Seduce A Hikikomori Wife? Miss Chicken & Her Mister The Villainous Emperor is My Pet? My Ex-Girlfriend is a Sociopath Bad x Bad: My Dear Hana Children of the Lesser Gods: Rise of a Huntress
In a blink of an eye she lost everything. Her home. Her family. Her identity. Having her whole clan wiped out and their ancestral homes leveled to the ground was something no one had ever expected. Unable to do anything about it and finding the news out too late was something that she will forever regret and carry deep in her heart for the rest of her life. This is why she chose to drink her sorrows away as she let her past self die along with every single person she had ever cared about and chose to live anew and rise from the ashes like phoenix! She then became known for her looks, habits and most of all her skills! The unparalleled beauty in vermillion that always had a wine jug in her hand, who has a fragile fairy-like appearance that can make kingdoms fall but has a ruthless and ice-cold personality, not caring about anyone but herself. Too bad she was also known to be a peerless genius doctor who was said to cure even the most impossible illnesses! While she lived her life in infamy and a self-imposed exile, unbeknownst to her, someone like her who has disappeared in the passing of time was looking for her. He was a dragon among men hidden in plain sight, waiting for the most opportune time to strike and take back what was rightfully his. But first, he needed to find his little red phoenix.
Love across time [Meiji 1895- Tokyo 2019] "You..you murderer!" 'It...it wasn't me,' she wanted to say. But the words would not leave her lips. The colour of blood covered her hands, proving the other persons point. It wasn't her, but why? Framed for her Mothers murder when she was ten year's old. Kaname Setsura spends the following eight years gathering information on the case. Against her families wishes, she accepts her scholarship to a famous art University, ST Rinkan. In that place, there is a 'clue' to the events from what happened eight years ago. However right as she is about to marry the man she loves, on the day of their graduation, an accident occurs, leading to her fiance to fall into a coma. Distraught, lost and uncertain Setsura shuts herself away from the world, and her half brother uses this chance to send her away abroad. Setsura accepts, but on that day, a grand scale earthquake occurs, right as she is about to board the plane and she wakes up in the middle of the roadside and finds herself in the year 1895. With the help of a man named 'Akito,' she settles into the Meiji era and discovers that the three major "accidents" in her life that occurred, one in 2011 and the two in Tokyo 2019, are connected to a series of cases in 1895 "Mysterious cases of the shard"
What would you do if you woke up in a forest with no memories? Would you cower in fear, or explore the strange new world? Join Vyrena on her journey through Gaeia as she tries to figure out her mysterious past! With the voice in her head named Dotty, she will make friends, enemies, gain new powers and become the greatest warrior she could ever be! Will she find out who she was before? What will the new world bring? Join her journey and find out! Will she find a dash of romance along the way? She just might! _____________________________________________________________ "Where am I?" Vyrena asked herself. The girl tried to move her body, but all of her muscles and bones ached. Her throat was as dry as the desert, she needed water. In the near distance, Vyrena could hear the sound of moving water. Gathering all of her strength, she crawled inch by inch towards the water source. Upon reaching the riverbank, she quenched her thirst greedily. It tasted clear and refreshing, a good sign. She could feel the dirt and grime that covered her entire body. Unable to bear it anymore, Vyrena dunked herself into the water. The cool refreshing feel of the river water jolted her senses. As she emerged from the water, she could finally open her eyes and take in her surroundings. -How did I end up here?- she thought to herself. She tried to remember what she could. Memories flashed through her mind. - I died - The realisation shocked her to the core. Her eyes were wide open. Recalling the details made her head spin. She recalled drinking a substance and laying down in her bed. A familiar hand held onto hers, his words echoed in her mind. -I'm here for you. I'm here for you.- But as soon as that memory faded, new memories from the host body bombarded her. When the recollection of memories was complete, a voice popped up in her mind. _____________________________________________________________ I hope you enjoy the story! If you love it or maybe not, give me some feedback in the comments or in a review! All feedback will be greatly appreciated~ Upload Schedule: Aiming for 1 to 2 chapter a day! *cross my fingers* 11am (GMT+8) Word Count per chapter: 1,000 words and up! PS: The art work is designed by @lushiette on Instagram! Thank you for bringing my girl to life~ Join my discord server: https://discord.gg/hYdy6uU Come chat with me on Discord at ValestriaMoon#9724! A huge thank you to everyone who supported me in posting my novel XD you know who you are~
Because of her ancestors, Mi Rong’s lineage has been cursed. She was born a princess, but neither was she saved from it. Like a ripple effect, her family line must atone for their actions. On every 100th full moon, a candidate is chosen to finish a mission. Being the chosen one, Mi Rong must finish her task sent by the heavens. She was sent to modern time with a sidekick wolf that had many hidden secrets beneath his paws. He was one of a kind, a spiritual beast from way before Mi Rong was born. As Mi Rong works her way in this modern world, she crosses path with a cold-hearted young man, Feng Jun Kai. Jun Kai was once a well-known superstar but abruptly retired when he had lost his wife in an accident, leaving his heart shut away from others. What was thought to be an accident turned out to be an intentional act by someone behind the scenes. Henceforth, he seeks for the culprit that lurks in the darkness. He returns back to his family business roots where he returns as the infamous young master Feng. Mi Rong’s only clue to her mission was to find a spellbook. While searching she establishes a company, the Xuan Group, selling ancient goods which later becomes one of the most influential underdogs in the business world. The group became known to the world, but very little was known of them, especially the mysterious leader of the pack. As Jun Kai seeks for his answers and Mi Rong goes through her trial in the open, an undercurrent stirs roughly beneath them. Although two with different goals, both collide in the same paths as the string of fate leads them to meet. Entering his cold rigid heart was as dimmed as the dark side of the moon, but an ending to the twisted connection had to be made. In the end, what was to come all fell on her choices... ... Jun Kai did not let her run away from him any longer and forcefully pulled her in. His hands then quickly pulled the mask away from her face. Mi Rong was not ready for Jun Kai's sudden move and was unable to stop him. The black cloth that was wrapped around as her mask was pulled off, revealing her face beneath it. The cloth flew away along with the wind. Jun Kai's eyes widened. It was a blow to Jun Kai. He was taken aback with shock. Different kinds of emotion were rushing inside him. It was stirring up all at once like a hurricane. No words could describe how he was feeling. His hand slowly reached out to the face he had known all along, "Why?" Jun Kai's voice began choking up and could speak no more. It was her all along?
A beautiful castle, a loving husband and a peaceful time. Marianne was having a beautiful life... Until she was killed by her own husband. Born as the daughter of a duke, she has lost everything at the age of 23 by the ways of Marquis Chester. But the world is mysterious and she gains a second chance at life. She wakes up from the pain and it is 2 days before her 21st birthday. Marianne meets her father who had left the world in her previous life. She cries as she steels herself. To never repeat the mistakes of the past again. "I have come to report of a Coup" But the King, Ekarter, does not believe her and forces her to become his fiance and work as a spy. "So, you want to make me your queen? Just so I can be your prisoner?"
In the realm of Chiji, a mythical world where hidden powers lie. Chaos ruled because of a few became drunk with power and abuse it. And inflicted a terrible balance upon the plains and brought chaos to Chiji. From this chaos, opposition rose and plotted. And so, the good deeds of few power wielders were forgotten. What remained in the minds of people was the horrible past. Thus, their existence slowly waned through time. Somehow, in a magic-imbued past, where the longing whispers of Xinyi to Ming resonated, the whims of fate which will bring change can be heard. What did they say? Only with curiosity may one find the answer... However, out from these devastating times, a Sorceress will bloom and slowly bring balance to this world. ----- ❣ ----- They are wedded through imperial edict, but she anticipates much from it although there is no love. However, on their wedding night… "In fairness, I'll be honest with you. I don't like you. I prefer to marry someone I choose. From this day forth, you are to live in Anjing Pavilion" says Lei Ming with no reservations. She is aggrieved to be disregarded and treated this way. "Wait!" shouts Xinyi. Lei Ming halts his steps, pestered. "What now?" "I'm grateful for sending me there, Lord husband, but please don't miss sending my allowance and I promise I will not show up and bother you," says Xinyi and bows in a pious manner. "The heck, this woman is totally shameless." Xinyi watches Lei Ming's back as he walks away. When he is out of earshot, she gives a careless smile and rests her palms on her waist. "This is totally unexpected. What a farce of a marriage. So what? I don't care too..." she says as she suddenly jumps and swirls around in glee. "Hahaha, Yippee! Thank you, husband of mine. Send me here. Send me there. I don't care. Send me anywhere or send me to another country. Since you don't care, I don't care as well," sings the bouncy Xinyi. She dances, eats, and drinks in merry. But… an unexpected encounter under the moonlight changes everything. Most of all, when he discovers he is meant to protect his wife who is the blossoming Sorceress. Will love springs forth out of this? Will she reach the pinnacle as a Sorceress and protect the source of power in this world? Find it out as both of them journey this path forced on them by fate. ----- ❣ ----- TAKE NOTE: 1.) There is no sex but have some violence during wars and fights. Prepare for an adventurous ride in the story. Know that romance is not the focus of the story. 2.) The story is not totally under the Chinese background. This is a different world, and every nation had their own backgrounds. So, I don't follow the Chinese way of naming and calling of characters. Like using their full names when I mention them, even with the greetings. 2.) Please buy this author a coffee to keep me alert when writing and to help pay for the daughter's college fees: [ko-fi.com/elijoneb] Note: *I want to thank Forsaken123, another author here, for his help and insights in the earlier chapters of this book. *The cover image is not mine. The credit goes to the owner. I will change it when I get a new one.
In their world, Jiang Mingyue is a promising female physician, serving the Crown Princess to find a cure for a dormant poison in the Princess's body. In their world, Yang Yun is a promising captain of an Elite soldier. He vowed to love and protect Mingyue all his life. Until an incident tore them apart. The two were separated into two different worlds. He pledged to search for her no matter how long it’ll take him, no matter how many dimension he had to travel to. But when he finally found her again, she had no memories of him. What else can he do but to work hard and win her heart back? ----- “First of all, I don’t believe in reincarnation.” “I’m not saying anything about reincarnation.” “Then what?” she raised a brow. “Time traveling? Are you sure you haven’t been watching too much sci-fi?” She pursed her lips when he didn’t say anything. “Let’s see,” she flicked across the pages. She watched him nodded and shook her head in disbelief. “You’re out of your mind.” She stood up and leaned towards him to place her hand on his forehead. He flinched. “What are you doing?” “Checking to see if you had a fever,” she said with a sigh. “But you seem healthy.” “I’m not sick.” “I know.” “I’m not crazy.” Yang Yun closed his eyes when she looked at him in doubt. He had been searching for her for years. And right now, the love of his life was standing right in front of him. But she doesn’t seem to remember him. It was as if her memories of the past, the memories of him have all forgotten. She lifted her hand, and her fingers rested on his cheek. “I like you, Yang Yun.” She drew her hand and frowned. “But I don’t understand why you keep telling me about these stories. Why are you forcing me to accept this?” She closed her eyes briefly. “Sometimes, I wonder if you really like me, or am I just a substitute to someone you knew in your past.” ----- Author's Note: The main genre of this story is Romance. But, there will be a bit of fantasy and political intrigue as well. ----- Cover: an edited image from a picture I found on pinterest. ----- Support me at https://ko-fi.com/zetsubouaichan
Shirley was in a dilemma, she has two options, first, to trust her gut feelings or second, to wait it out. Her instincts have never betrayed her but if she followed them this time, she was sure of her defeat. She can’t live in doubt. That is not how she lives her life. She gives her all or nothing. She has given her everything to this relationship. She has turned her back on rumors. And now, all of it has come to this point. It's now or never, she has never regretted a single thing in her life and she sure not was starting with this. So she took a deep breath and took the plunge. Aaron was drowning in a sea of despair. He had declared her guilty in his own warped sense of justice by jumping to the conclusion. What he had thought of her betrayal turned out to be his misunderstanding. But what could be done now? She was gone, left without a trace. How could he ever ask for forgiveness, nonetheless, a second chance when she is not here? Even if she was here does he deserve her forgiveness? In the end, it was he who had abandoned her without giving it a second thought. What will happen when destiny gives him a second chance? Will he be able to grasp it with both hands or let it slip like sand between his clenched fists? Or there will be someone else who would whisk her away?
"THE PRINCE IS NOT DEAD!" her words, in front of court, sealed her fate... Leaving Holstein is impossible, now! Ghosts and Princes want Alexa! From the first moment Magnus von Wuttenfal met Alexa, he knew she was a liar and a problem. Who’s that girl and why his cold heart pumps so fast for her? Since Alexa laid eyes on the exasperating First Prince of Holstein, she knew she should keep a distance. Not only he’s sharp-tongued, entitled, and incredibly sexy, but he’s about to marry the kind Lady Cordelia! Does the First Prince Magnus, think of her as a mere toy... or an actual threat? Or something else? The fact she was born with a peculiar gift, and raised as someone else, shall not come to light. Her sad past full of betrayal and pain cannot be unveiled to anyone. Never! Torn between Prince Alexander and Prince Magnus, living and dead, her past and her future, will she love and be loved in return? Or will she once again be used and discarded? ------------------------ "Why... did you do that?" "Well, that was when I regretted acting like a bad son and a vile man, and before God. I had to take responsibility, didn't I?" 'But what nonsense is that ?! It's not like you really put your… thing… into my… thingy….' "Oh! OHHHH! You want to use me so you don't marry your bride! You set everything up! From sending me to the maze to… up to…" "Having you in my arms, tasting your mouth as I did this peach?! Is that what you're stuttering on, Lady Saskia? This will be repeated ad infinitum when we get married. That and more," FINAL ARC ONGOING! ------------------------ WARNING: HEAVY SUPERNATURAL ELEMENTS, GORE, DISTURBING THEMES, RICH-IN-STORY NOVEL Discover one of the 10 best romance novels you will read on this site. Doubt me? Try it out hehehe. Now seriously. I hope you like this story. If you wish, please support this tale by voting, rating, and commenting. Your feedback on typos or bad grammar is welcomed and appreciated. --- Also, check MizA’s original novel: Never Date a Man in Pink
A past incident had left a tramautizing effect on her which forced her to made a world around her against the world outside. But he break through it and come into her life with an unexpected encounter. He fell for her in the first encounter. Will he able to make her fall for him.
Having left his hometown with shattered relationships due to his decision to join the military Matthew Rong returns after nine and a half years, uncertain of how people will treat him. Lexi Yao, the only person who supported his decision, left less than two years later leaving her family and her child. Just weeks after the birth of her child in an arranged family marriage her husband of less than a year died, putting her in a position that she could not cope. Eventually, when she was ready, she returned to her hometown to resume full-time care of her child bringing her now successful fashion business with her. Matthew had never forgotten the promises Lexi made to marry him prior to and in the twelve months after he joined the military, despite her marriage and becoming a widow. He hoped that he would be able to marry her and secure for them both the future that they had believed was there for them as teenagers. Just after Matthew’s return, having reluctantly agreed to drive Matthew home after a celebration for not only his return but the engagement of their brothers, Lexi and Matthew were kidnapped by the terrorist who helped make Matthew’s career seeing his rapid promotion to General. To protect Lexi, Matthew knew he needed to use changes in the law to protect her and their assets that the Terrorist sought to exploit and committed to her through a forced marriage ceremony at the hands of the Terrorists. For Matthew this was the one thing that had kept him going, and for Lexi she only agreed to protect herself believing there was no legal validity in the ceremony. On their rescue Lexi was confronted with the truth of another forced marriage and was determined to escape this to have her own life, free from domination by men. Matthew not only was left to fight to secure the love of his life but to protect his friends and family from the terrorist who decided that they were fair game in the pursuit of his goals. Can Matthew succeed and win? Can Lexi learn to trust and forgive Matthew? Will the one secret that she has been keeping for eight years drive them apart? This is the story of their journey, with their friends and family along for the ride. Note – for those who have read my first story Offer to the CEO, our favourite couple makes appearances here, with Anna becoming a huge supporter and friend of our Female Lead. Extract: “Matthew, you b*stard. You knew our marriage would be valid, and you forced it on me. You are no better than my parents who arranged my first marriage?” “What did you want me to do? Let you be killed?” “You should have thought about me, not your own selfish needs. Get the hell out of my sight and let me be I'm going to stay away from you.” “Forget it. You are the wife of a military officer. You will live in my villa and forget about going anywhere without my permission. It is not safe.” “Safe? I am not safe from you, everyone, everything and everywhere else is safe!” Please note the cover artwork is not mine. Also while at the start of this story it may seem that the lead is male, in fact the lead is a female lead (be patient for this to be shown)
It is said that angels and demons walk on Earth in human forms. But what if it's not just a myth and they actually are present around us, keeping a low profile. What if it's the boy you bully in school, or the girl who always keeps to herself in class are not humans and waiting to creep into your dreams. What if it's a girl who always tops the class and her brainiac image is actually a part of her superpowers, the bullied boy is keeping chains around his ire, not letting his unstable powers to unleash and the world doesn't lack such beings. Aden and Amara are such two lost souls which are fated to be together. But is it really that simple for them to be together? Or destiny has something else written for them. What will happen if these two finally cross each other's path after walking for decades on Earth. Or is it really the first time they will run into each other? -------- Other books of the author: •My Little Sunshine [Completed] •The Return Of The Beguiling Beauty [On-going] •Tales Of Love [On-going] You can join the discord server for updates and picture references: https://discord.gg/tHARRPX Instagram: dumdum.007 Twitter: _dumdum007 Facebook: facebook.com/dumdumwrites Patreon: patreon.com/dumdum007 [In case you want to support the author.] *P.S.! The cover DOESN'T belongs to me. Credit goes to the original artist!*
#COMPLETED# ***All chapters marked- (edited) have been edited by Larkspur and Aoi_Tenshi Late At Night- "Cancel your engagement with my stepsister and marry me" Senja said brazenly. Xiao Tianyou looked at the little girl in front of him with amusement, "But, why should I marry you?" Senja tilted her head to one side and smirked coquettishly, "Because I am smart and beautiful. Moreover, I know how to find Gong Xu" "Why do you think I care about this Gong Xu guy?" He asked with a cold voice. "Of course, you care! He was the one who killed your wife." Xiao Tianyou glared at her with menacing eyes. His thin lips shut tight before he spoke in a low and hoarse voice. "Are you threatening me?!" "I wouldn't dare!" She feigned fear and continued, "Let’s call this ‘relationship with benefit’." *** She was a cunning and haughty professional thief from modern era. Together with her three brothers, she stole whatever ‘requested’. However, Senja was sent back to ancient time by an elderly woman to find someone named Yun. Only by finding him could she come back to her era. Once she arrived there, people from the kingdom’s army claiming that she was a daughter of a formidable clan of spies who had been kidnapped for a year. *How could that be??* She was sure that she hadn't occupied someone else’s body, so how could she have become a brilliant divine girl with virtuous conduct and noble demeanor, who had also saved the country? *Hmm...* Resolve this by feigning amnesia then... hee-hee... So, she can fake a memory loss, but can she keep up to HER reputation?! Especially since their personalities are poles apart! Then there’s the overprotective grandfather of hers who has forbidden her from stepping out of the manor lest she be kidnapped again! Grr..………How can she start looking for this Yun guy if she can't go outside? There’s just one way! Marry the military commander a.k.a, the Second Prince, Xiao Tianyou. Argh!!!…….. he is the fiancé of her vicious stepsister!! *A.W.E.S.O.M.E. Everything is going against me!* ........................................................................................ ##Meet me on instragram : jikan_yo_tomare Disclaimer : cover picture is from pinterest.com Check out my other stories: **THE STORY OF DUSK **The Love of a Lycan
(Warning: Mature content) "Handsome, we must have met before. Was it in my bed... or was it in yours?" Shera Black asked, sitting on a snake-print sofa. She had her chin rested in her right hand as her left hand twirled a wineglass leisurely. Leo Qin who was standing before her narrowed his gaze. "Are all women so unrestrained these days?" "I don't know about other women." The woman's lips curled into a sinister smirk. "But, you may want to step aside. You are standing on a booby trap." Leo Qin was speechless. This woman stole his heart, and now she set a trap for him? Preposterous! ___ ... Falling from the grace of an aristocratic family, Shera Black's view of the world crumbled along with her state of mind. How does it feel to lose everything overnight? Heiress-turned-beggar? Unimaginable! The world was cruel... but it was much more cruel to her. Why?! Just because of some measly facts that were beyond her control and sins she didn't commit? And just when everyone thought she was done for... when they all thought she was on the brink of insanity or suicide, Shera Black unexpectedly rose right back up. Shera Black: Hello world, I'm back! Miss me already? World: Wait. Something's not right. She has become a villainess?! And this villainess was clearly not here to make friends. She was back to wreck harvoc and destroy the world! Not only that,.... She was pretty much done wrecking harvoc. Guess what's next? ... As the heir to the Qin Empire, everything was under his grasp. Yet Leo Qin would never have thought that the only thing he didn't predict was the calamity he had poked... and this calamity was coming his way. Looking at the female 'calamity' before him, he gritted his teeth and hissed. "Woman, you are playing with fire!" The calamity crossed her legs and glanced right back at him. "I am fire. How can I play with myself, Mr. Qin?" He looked at her crossed legs and frowned in disapproval. "Women shouldn't cross their legs." The woman leisurely tapped the armrest. "Oh? Are our legs too short to be crossed?" "It's disrespectful!" "Respect?" She looked at him curiously. "What's that?" Annoyed now, Leo Qin said, "If you continue being like this, no one will want to marry you!" But the woman just smiled evilly. "Who said I want to get married? Pfft, seriously, who still does that?" Leo Qin was speechless. God, can we have a chat? I don't want this woman anymore!!! Brace yourselves: Vicious Female lead. You may want to prepare yourselves for some of those things female leads don't usually do ... Editor: May May ___ Discord: tinyurl.com/Avalorian Instagram: Avalorian_
Maya is not your typical hacker. Ten years ago, her only living family was killed in cold blood. The killers make her take the fall but after ten years in prison, she's become stronger. Now, she hunts the very monsters that hunt others. She's untraceable until she runs into Alec, the Underworld's notorious leader who doesn't seem to be quite human. Things aren't as they seem though, as Maya is pulled into a twisted fate. Maya now has to run from the Underworld boss who wants her as his own and a mysterious hacker who seems to have it out for her. What could possibly go wrong, right? EVERYTHING. I do not own the cover, the picture used is from Pinterest. Wanna talk? Find me on Discord! Blissfullrage#3336 ___________________________________ Would like to donate? paypal.me/Blissfullrage
“I’m not a ‘thing’ to be possessed.” Olivia pulled her weight with her elbows and stared at Maxen whose head was now wedged between her legs. “Absolutely,” he agreed, widening the high slit of her gown. “You’re a goddess, Olivia. And I will even worship the land that you would set foot on.” ... Olivia Lin. Exiled heiress of the biggest corporation in the small island of Nisia. Nobody knew of her name. Heck, nobody knew of her existence. Henry Lin, her father, left her in the farthest place from the country as possible the moment she was born. Maxen Victor Eton Sui, a heartbreak dressed in a hot suit. What more if he's wearing a crown? Now when their paths collide, will sparks fly? ... *Certain scenes are graphic and could be upsetting to some. This story is NOT for everyone. Proceed with caution. Discretion is advised. edited by Swaning join us in discord! tinyurl.com/filledelisle IG: filledelisle
Kate once had it all. Clothes, food, a place to stay, and a loving family. However, it all ended when her parents were murdered by a mysterious organization. Stella, her split personality, was the reason she barely made it out with her life. Living and hiding on the streets was a very difficult thing to do for a nine-year-old, but Stella helped her along the way. A few years passed as she lived everyday in desperation. Tired, hungry, bitter, and on the verge of collapse, she was saved by a young boy when things took a turn for the worse. His name was Ciel Summers, her future dearest one. Things were going smoothly until she managed to pass the entrance exam to the prestigious Saint Claire Academy. Hidden schemes played behind the scenes as a serum capable of awakening the latent powers of anyone below the age of 15 was developed. They set their eyes on the elite students of the academy, and kidnapped Ciel, who became an unwilling test subject. It was the beginning of a series of events, which led Kate to discover the name of the organization that killed her parents and the secrets that were buried deep within her body. [Disclaimer: I will be changing POV's from time to time. This is how I wanted this story to be written. So please, bear with me. Thank you.] Updates: 1 chapter a day. Feel free to donate in my Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/YourSir Chat with me on discord!: https://discord.gg/haeYN7N ---------- Feel free to check out my other story! "Go! Go! Summons: Summoning the Perfect Boyfriend" [Fantasy Romance, Female Lead, Comedy, Slice of Life.] https://www.webnovel.com/book/17411890805745005/Go!-Go!-Summons! Special thanks to RedPandaChick for helping me edit my novel. Thank you very much!
All i wanted was to go to my idol's concert but can someone tell me why the plane exploded halfway? Can someone tell me how i landed in another dimension. Why am i a furnace? Why are all my pets so cute? And wait, who's this guy here? please don't come near me, i don't wanna have dragon babies yet! dear pets why aren't you helping your master? How can you carry me to this guy's bed? Hey! Hey!
Everything was so amorous and passionate, eyes of two loving soul were looking into each other, holding hands tightly. They were searching for each other's inner-self. Before he could say something, he felt some warm drops on his hand. Coming back to senses he held her face in his hand,"Kayara, What happened, why are you crying? What's the matter? Don't you want to share it with your best friend?" worry flashed on his face and he felt like some strong arrows pierced his heart. "Okay okay, if you don't want to answer my question, It's okay. Really, I'm sorry I didn't want to hurt you. Now , please don't cry. I........ " Making him stop saying further, she got up and ran away, sobbing and wailing badly. .....
Mozen, is someone who has lived twice, and is about to die twice. While waiting for her 2nd life to end, excitement coursed through her veins. “Yes! The life of a lackluster spirit, haunting all the like in my free time. How I can’t wait!” Much to her disappointment, she is thrust back into her first life as Hong Luo, laying upon the ground with her bones broken, and internal injuries bleeding out. Yet does she care about her injuries? No! Does she care about how the servants just spit on her? No! Does she care about getting revenge for the injustice she experienced in both lives... No! She’s too upset to care, screaming out her indignation. “What cruel joke is this, I’m not laughing! This lazy dolt is done with this! Why can’t I be a ghost in peace?” A once genius doctor, reborn again into a life she’d never thought she’d return to. All she wants is to live lazily, but life isn’t letting her do so. Time after time, something or another manages to get in the way. Like a certain someone who tries to fix her bad habits. “Why are you poking me, let me sleep!” “Duke Ding’s servants are at the door.” “Ugh, go give them the medical pills on the top shelf to the far right.” “The crown prince is here.” “Go hide my tea, and kick him out!” “The emperor is at the back door.” Screaming out gibberish, “Lock the door, and put up a quarantine sign!” Laying back down hugging her pillow, Hong Luo feels movement on her bed. “Why are you in my bed.. AH don’t fall asleep, GET OUT!” _________________________ Living another life was already tiring for Mozen. Trying her best in a body that was not her own, morals eating at her conscience, suffering day by day as she lazily lived the life of a recluse doctor. Now after finally coming to an explosive end, instead of resting in the calm rivers of death, she's now returned yet again. _________________________ The image above was drawn by me! https://www.instagram.com/mykataren/ _________________________ If you're looking for a story with a lazy mc, characters that don't act the way you want them to, and things that go boom. Then stick around, this might be the story for you. Spare me the knives and the guns if my grammar jumps out the window and runs through the streets in its birthday suit. This is my first Novel so don't kill me, it might get better as you read. _________________________ Updates: Coming back soon! Word count - varies between 1400 to 3000 _________________________ Ages 17 and below not recommended. Dark topic's along with very slight R-18 content, are present, but not heavily. (technically low smut)
Táng JiaXing, a girl who had spent most of her life wildly in her village in a remote corner of the Wind Kingdom, suddenly had to leave to the Capital city and she gets involved in the power struggles of the Imperial Palace. A local hero to the Prime Minister's daughter? Everything she did till now casually is connected to the Empire? Why? Turns out she was the 'Chosen One' by the Gods for some purpose even she was unaware of. And wait... the Demon Realm is interested in her too? What will happen to her love with the exiled Prince? He is not a Prince now but a big underworld businessman? How much does he know about her 'supposed' fate? Divine Ruler? Supporting the Emperor? Really don't care! All I want is to spend the rest of my life with my Prince.... But will she be allowed to choose her own fate? Will Love conquer all? Lu Chenglie, the genius Third Prince of the Kingdom... He was sent away from the place by the plots of the Empress... When he was about to be engulfed in the darkness of his heart, he saw her... The Moon of his Life.... "Don't die", she shouted and he wanted life, a good long life with her... She loved him even though she knew of the darkness in him, something even he could not do... When he learned tidbits about her 'fate' he decided to fight for her... Not opposing her fate but by aiding her to achieve her goals quickly so that he can get her for himself... He made himself strong and wealthy so that he has the power to defend her if need arises... But could he protect her from her fate...? This story is about the love between two people who are not supposed to be together by fate and how they succeed with their love in the end. Give a chance to this book if you like a supportive ML and an OP FL...
Hello! This is my second novel, my first being Hinder-Rella. I am going with a darker tone to this one. More of an adventure/romance/comedy/not meant for pure minds that will easily be corrupted by my words and can never look at the world same way kinda feel. Any who I am warning you know, there is only one chapter and it jumped right into a bad place the happy go lucky then bad again. So be warned this is almost nothing like Hinder-Rella unless you read the murder scene or toture scene or parental abuse scene. Cause it's kinda like that but maybe worse haven't decided but here you go. My way to you. Happy reading!
When reviewing, I always give each category one extra star to the score. Except for newbie writers, who receive two stars. Writing Quality 4: Writing has very little grammar mistakes, such as swapping "you're" for "your", but again, these are very rare. Beyond that, there are some awkward sentences. Not that they're wrong, just that it doesn't feel like what a person would say, such as, "What is your level of skill in the kitchen?" or "Stop it! You are confusing enough! My heart can't take any more cuteness!" And finally, I would recommend breaking down some of the paragraphs, so that they don't become blocks of text. Especially when there are two speakers in the same paragraph. Stability of Updates 5: Personally, I don't like this category, as sometimes the writer needs more time to finish up a chapter, but may end up sacrificing the quality to keep the release rate, so I always give it a 5. Story Development 4: Story flows well enough, and it manages to hold the reader's attention, despite some of the events sounding a bit far fetched, such as how MC tricks the brothel owner at the beginning. Character Design 5: Characters are quite distinct from one another and interesting. World Background 3: This category could be improved, in hopes to paint a better picture of the environment in the reader's mind. Better doesn't mean a nicer picture, but one that the reader can more clearly understand. Review score (4+5+4+5+3)/5 = 4.2 Score given = (5+5+5+5+4)/5 = 4.8
I found the premise interesting and the story also flows smoothly. Characters themselves are varied and keeps things interesting. However the narration and the paragraph structure need some work as I am oftentimes left confused as to who the speaker is or what exactly is happening. But I am only in the first half of the story and there is still a lot to read and it is just my initial opinion of what I have read so far…
Starting with the title it presents a romance tale which is contrary to the plotline inside. The main lead has demons to protect and aid her in the plans. Stating the world background it's a detailed imagery to narrate the story. Though the second chapter was a bit ambiguous to understand what was actually happening. In a nut shell the narration is a new thing to read when everyone is following the trends this narration is something unique and productive. With all elements blended though certain grammatical errors are there needed to be corrected, but it's readable. ❤
This story is truly a hidden gem amongst many other stories. It will capture the readers hearts and emotions chapter after chapter. It is a beautiful and yet terrifying at times story of a young women/girl as it follows her through her transmigration to her new world and family. The world is full of magic and her adoptive mother loves her dearly. The chaos brought into her life never seems to end as those wanting her for there own selfish goals are relentless. Truly a must read and a hidden gem as the story progresses:) Thank you for such a heart grabbing story :)
I truly amazing journey of a young girl going through trials and tribulations. From tears to joy and fear to terror and then calm. Ariana is an amazing young girl on her way to becoming a young women. She meets the nastiest and nicest people along the way. Her journey is incredible and powerful and will move the reader through tears and joy as well :) Thank you for such a great story and please keep it going :)
This story can take your emotions any direction at any time. One never truly knows just what might happen next. Ariana is a beautiful young girl with the soul of a young women from another time and world. In this world she is chased by a dark corrupt church and the corrupt council. All she has are her adopted family and her friends. She has power within her but it needs time to grow and mature. Who will win and at what cost. Thank you so much for the great story so far and please keep updating it :)
I have read your work until Chapter 26 and here is my review that reflects my thoughts about your writing Writing Quality - No complaints there. You seem proficient enough in English which is a plus in my book. Atleast, I don't have to keep correcting the tenses or verbs as I read. Thank God for that 🙂🙂 Stability of Updates - This doesn't matter to me much since sometimes a writer needs more time to flesh out the details. I myself sometimes scrap the overall first draft and start anew with a different plot/mindset in some chapters. Also, as a voracious reader myself, I had rather have the author concentrate on quality than quantity. Story Development - The story started off with gruesome things happening to the MC. Being sold off to a brothel by your mother just because your father couldn't keep his hands off you might leave a person physiologically imbalanced. With the first chapter, it becomes clear that it's not going to be a slow dragging process which sets the pace nicely but at times it's too fast and leaves the reader lagging behind with their mind stuck on something else. Character Design - The author doesn't fall into the quagmire of the stereotypical characters which is a plus. On the other hand, I feel the author can work a bit more on it and add a bit more gravitas to their thoughts and future development. World Background - Hmmm.... Maybe the author should work a bit more on this but that might just be my own preference and other readers are fine with the way things are. Hopefully, this review will help the author and they won't come with lit torches and sharpened knives at me while being asleep. 🙂🙂🙂
This story started out very dark for me in the first chapters but it has gained my support and interest. The story has a strong FL who is young and vibrant, she has lots of character and loves her friends and family. They are her reverse dragon scale. She has to protect them as they have to protect her from an evil organization and religion. The story covers every emotion one has. Please keep on writing and look forward to seeing many more chapters. Thank you. :)