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Ashwatthama
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2018-12-09 19:32

Don't see my rating. Ratings are low because my review is a little different from what u guys may think. This is a continue review As I will go further in this story . I will write in this same review more information. Or by comment. As for reading to be half of full , is because author have done a pretty good job by writing. So even if I will not like this story later this 1/2 star represent his hard work. Right now I have randomly read chapter. Where he take a slave . And I feel good , well I mean concept is deferent , so I want to read more for now. I have downloaded it and I m going to read from start . I will also give rating next time when I write. So , current rating is just for novel ( minimum ) .

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*reading = rating , my mistake sorry

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Currently I m at ch 10 Author , I want to say one thing . Chakra is not strong as qi So you should do some changes as a technique of projecting beams of chakra Or something and he is not fit for ninja He is more of taijutsu But only that on Naruto world will not make it attractive or cool You should make that green energy in someway different compared to chakra And pls also bring his ape form Man that's cool you know at full 🌒.

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I m currently at ch 23 Author you r truly ruining story now Super Saiyan strength so weak And for God sake he is legendary super Saiyan so why yellow hair they should be green man , don't say it's because of chakra Ok And man he is so weak that I m started getting bored You work hard But you choose a wrong mc for the like of story you write Or He should be a little different. It's getting very annoying. So I give it 2 star for now 🌟 But u have work hard So just continue but I may stop reading it soon

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