Item: Broly in Naruto
Rating: 1
Author: ExceedExceedExceed

ExceedExceedExceedLv55yr

2019-05-08 07:49

if you want your character power with the standard of naruto world, you should just make him some genius from that naruto world .. why make him a super saiyan with incorporating its power .. just pure nonesense

Broly in Naruto

CaptainBoyHole

3.9

88 Chs

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ExceedExceedExceedLv5

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5yr

ExceedExceedExceedLv5

if you dont want to end your novel with just 10 chapter ... why take a op character from other anime .. why dont you create your own? or take other character which are not op ... and i dont think broly is op just because there is ki in their universe but because he is a saiyan who can adapt to that kind of energy .. so of course his super saiyan bloodline adaptability in naruto world will adapt to chakra to make its user powerful .. and i think saiyan dont just use ki to strengthen them ... they are physically stronger even as a a child so the problem here is why make your mc to be broly? like it is just pure nonsense

5yr

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MonkeysAreDumbLv3

So you decided to write a fan fiction about broly and you thought it would be a good idea to completly change his personality? Then, you decided it would be fun to nerf the **** out of the mc? If you didn't want your MC to be anything like broly, why didn't you just use a orginal character with saiyan bloodline? You had to have understood this would leave many people disappointed, right?

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AshwatthamaLv4

Reveal spoiler

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GoatTakingAShowerLv4

He wrote a story about Broly, someone born with a power level of 10000 and only growing stronger, making him less of a genius than itachi or kakashi. it's just some low-class saiyan with "broly's" named slapped on and a similar personality.

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Majeh7Lv5

Nothing much, it's better to read first and if you don't like it then don't read it. also, don't spam 1 star it's better to go away. People try really hard to write a story for everyone to enjoy but it's not easy.

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Ignitor_SaiyanLv4

I just finished reading this book in one go and I'm not sure what to say. I'm a fan of Broly and the legendary Super Saiyan being nerfed so much and being compared to the likes of Naruto characters is very upsetting. To much lack of logics. No ki because it is a different energy? What kind of nonsense is that. Every living thing, even plants have ki (AKA life force). It's a universal energy. Why would broly not have life force? It doesn't make sense at all.

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Rk6TLv4

Broly is increadibly weak in terms of dragon balls tandards, his super sayian forms are as strong as the regular characters so if you are expecting the mc to be strong then this is not the novel for you. Naruto is stronger or on par with the mc so there is one example, maily the mc is nerfed beyond believe.

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NyxariasLv5

FU*K YOU AUTHOR !!!!!!!! What the fu*k did u do to Broly u tranisht his Name and you literlly SHIT on Sayajin´s FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU*K

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