Good writing ! His choices at the beginning were a bit surprising but it actually turned out pretty well and made the story much more interesting.
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LIKEI'm not sure of what you mean by "at least make it believable" I just shared my sincere opinion about this novel I truly appreciate most of the mc's choices, especially the way he settled Naruto's world and the companions he picked And upgrading the strengh of some a priori unrelated characters was in fact about him creating a foundation for his future sect which is plenty smart when considering that only he could activate his "gifts" Thus the characters only profited if he so chose
kanukai:I mean, you can write your own review but at least make it believable, it would be nice to know that novel im reading has a competant author.
Well, you have my sincerest apologies. You know i really thought you were the author, do my bad. But seriously the reader status is misleading and can lead people theorise about stuff.
Human001:I'm not sure of what you mean by "at least make it believable" I just shared my sincere opinion about this novel I truly appreciate most of the mc's choices, especially the way he settled Naruto's world and the companions he picked And upgrading the strengh of some a priori unrelated characters was in fact about him creating a foundation for his future sect which is plenty smart when considering that only he could activate his "gifts" Thus the characters only profited if he so chose
Ok, i understand your point and i must admit that i also consider the number of read chapters a criterion for the comments reliability even though it can sometimes be misleading
kanukai:Well, you have my sincerest apologies. You know i really thought you were the author, do my bad. But seriously the reader status is misleading and can lead people theorise about stuff.