Interesting premise so far. There are some grammatical mistakes but those can be fixed with a quick edit. Author has created a nice storyline with a unique plot to the reincarnation genre. Main character is interesting as well. Just a heads-up to the author to remove the Chinese characters if you want the novel to be whitelisted again. Keep writing!
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