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Sweating_Cloud
Sweating_CloudLv56yr
2018-10-28 21:39

The story seems to be well thought out and the info dump is done in a concise manner! But you really could use a bit more proofreading. Might be helpful to read through your chapters a few times before publishing!

Sweet Desire

Panqiuyan
4.1

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Panqiuyan
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Thank you

6yr
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LuoYeYouLing
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Reveal spoiler

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nc5599
nc5599Lv3

I'm genuinely enjoying the story so far! The plot seems intriguing and the characters keep you curious to read more. Since it's still in the starting stages there isn't much to say but I want to see where this goes! Will continue reading this!

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deepu_
deepu_Lv15

This book deserves 5 rating for the effort author has put in explaining places and characters.. only draw back is paragraphs are too long and there's no update for a long time.. I hope you will get back on track.. All the best dear author

4yr
firestorm08
firestorm08Lv10

So nice......................................................................................................................................................................

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marina22
marina22Lv3

I like the writing, the story is very good and I’m always looking for the next chapter! I loved, I think you have a great potential as an author! Your writing is amazing

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Foxy_Jovy
Foxy_JovyLv5

Good story whereby the MC life is not an easy & fairytale. She got her life change when she begin he chores in the palace. I'm positive her revenge & real goal will begin when she starts serving the empress. It's like reading a drama not a novel. I enjoy & like it! Looking forward for more.

6yr
Katherinekee
KatherinekeeLv15

Just start reading hope is an interesting story with good strong character.................... .................................................

5yr
Arlene_Cantu
Arlene_CantuLv2

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hazel0328
hazel0328Lv6

Beautiful storyline, but the author should try and repetition of line and give correct spellings, otherwise I love the novel . 😚😚😚😚😚😚👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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