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The10thCrow
The10thCrowLv145yr
2019-05-16 21:25

I can't read anymore. As someone who is beginner(2years) in the martial arts world. Its highly unlikely for kung fu to be this powerful. I would have suspended my belief if it was cultivation but kung fu? Kung fu is ****! It isn't a martial art no more. Its just a stupid movement arts. Sure their flexible but any mma fighter/mui thai could literally kill this guy. Kung fu its useless maybe 500 years ago it was used but now? All the original practitioners are all died. (Great leap forward) search it. I just can't believe this guy is strong as I feel I could knock this guy out in 4 rounds. Just can't ****! I hate this feeling! I just finished reading The Reincarnation of the sword god. And was searching for a new mmorpg novel but why?

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EccentricGallumbit
EccentricGallumbitLv10

Come on. Can't you go along with the book and accept the premise that there are families of people carrying on the wuxia kung fu traditions from many generations ago? After all, the characters in this novel are definitely not being taught the kung fu taught at the gym you go to. In fact, Gu Fei (MC) is constantly griping about how his students as a PE teacher assume that his kung fu is the kung fu that you're talking about. This just seems like such a silly thing to criticize. All martial arts webnovels and comics blow their sports out of proportion.

Shiro_MSFA
Shiro_MSFALv4

Please review my novel EEWAO. Eng-V (Game novel blue white cover) Im still learning tho. Please help me fix my novel by review wich wrong wich right. I take bad comment, but please show me wich part that need fix. Your review will really really make me happy. Thanks. Hope u have a nice day :)

chu_chan
chu_chanLv6

First this is fiction, why do you have to behave like that chick sitting in an action movie and trying to tell everybody that this movie is unrealistic and cars do not explode when you shoot at the tires? Second there are tons of kung fu styles and for example shaolin kung fu is still very strong and outsiders will not get taught their secret techniques. Third 2 years in martial arts is a beginner like you said and how do you think, as a beginner, you can correctly gauge skills of anyone higher then you? Just take belt system, a white belt will think black belts are gods and will most likely not understand the minute differences of 1dan or 4dan. You are just showing your ignorance with this comment

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