After reading though 30+ chapter, I think, I better drop this. The game element is truly dump. If someone really open a game like this, it will be closed in a week. It's just like fantasy world that has a game system. Crimes, gores, sexual contents (not happen yet, but a mentioned of allowance by the gamemakers), these happened secretly in the context of the story, and the government don't issue a ban yet. MC don't have anything but kung fu. Kung Fu maniac with out a specific character or goal. A casual and very noob player with an exploited cheat, called Kung Fu skills. The story can be more interesting, if his mage class has at lease a hint to do with a progress of the story aside from being mentioned as a hindrance or a handicap, he has against those with physically related class. Side characters? Aside from the female thief, who possibly be a female lead, there is no one that memorable at all up to this point.
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LIKEI can't read anymore. As someone who is beginner(2years) in the martial arts world. Its highly unlikely for kung fu to be this powerful. I would have suspended my belief if it was cultivation but kung fu? Kung fu is ****! It isn't a martial art no more. Its just a stupid movement arts. Sure their flexible but any mma fighter/mui thai could literally kill this guy. Kung fu its useless maybe 500 years ago it was used but now? All the original practitioners are all died. (Great leap forward) search it. I just can't believe this guy is strong as I feel I could knock this guy out in 4 rounds. Just can't ****! I hate this feeling! I just finished reading The Reincarnation of the sword god. And was searching for a new mmorpg novel but why?
It's the nationalism, u can't expect to see muai THAI as the mc's main skill in a CHINESE novel, right?
The10thCrow:I can't read anymore. As someone who is beginner(2years) in the martial arts world. Its highly unlikely for kung fu to be this powerful. I would have suspended my belief if it was cultivation but kung fu? Kung fu is ****! It isn't a martial art no more. Its just a stupid movement arts. Sure their flexible but any mma fighter/mui thai could literally kill this guy. Kung fu its useless maybe 500 years ago it was used but now? All the original practitioners are all died. (Great leap forward) search it. I just can't believe this guy is strong as I feel I could knock this guy out in 4 rounds. Just can't ****! I hate this feeling! I just finished reading The Reincarnation of the sword god. And was searching for a new mmorpg novel but why?
Please review my novel EEWAO. Eng-V (Game novel blue white cover) Im still learning tho. Please help me fix my novel by review wich wrong wich right. I take bad comment, but please show me wich part that need fix. Your review will really really make me happy. Thanks. Hope u have a nice day :)