All the characters are extremely bland, except perhaps the MC's mercenary group having at least 2D characteristics. All the female players are insufferable and friendly with eachother. The MC is everyone else's *****, he does everything for them under the guise of him being a "good person". The only time he got pissed off was because some retarded woman from his guild almost lost him tens of thousands of dollars worth of top-grade equipment that belonged to a friend of his, but he immediately cucked out and forgave her. The MC gets embarrassed by some priest that heals him at random times and everyone calls that "teasing", I call that retarded. A bunch of women from his guild attack him out of nowhere sometimes yet he doesn't retaliate because the MC is a "good person". There's a point where he goes to another city and there's a woman married to the leader of a powerful guild, she f**ks with anyone who disrespects her and has her guildmates kill them and anyone from the same guild on sight then making them lose levels repeatedly, but then when he sees her again, he forgives her because "anyone would've done the same". Are you retarded ? Only the most psychotic would f**k this hard with people, he even tries to compare it to someone else helping him in a tavern by killing 5 guys whom he had just killed the friend of (because of a bounty collection mission). They were about to kill you ! It's not the same ! For some reason the MC hides that he's the guy who killed a dude he hated because it'd attract people challenging him, which I doubt, but he keeps doing it months later when everyone else lost interest. The game rules are unreliable at best. I can't describe how much I hate this novel. I hate every interaction between characters, there are some realistic ones here and there, but overall they suck and it gets worse the longer you read. Review was written by Parpaing from NU.
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Wow, I feel like I've read the first 100 chapters and skipped 99 chapters of filler! In depth reviews like this are necessary for people who want to know what they're going to get before starting a new Novel.
if i am not wrong you are supposed to review the novel from your own point of view.
Thank you. I hated bad characters like that the most. I know i should not read then. Probably this is first novel of author.
Thank you. I hated bad characters like that the most. I know i should not read then. Probably this is first novel of author.
I can't read anymore. As someone who is beginner(2years) in the martial arts world. Its highly unlikely for kung fu to be this powerful. I would have suspended my belief if it was cultivation but kung fu? Kung fu is ****! It isn't a martial art no more. Its just a stupid movement arts. Sure their flexible but any mma fighter/mui thai could literally kill this guy. Kung fu its useless maybe 500 years ago it was used but now? All the original practitioners are all died. (Great leap forward) search it. I just can't believe this guy is strong as I feel I could knock this guy out in 4 rounds. Just can't ****! I hate this feeling! I just finished reading The Reincarnation of the sword god. And was searching for a new mmorpg novel but why?
Dude. I think you are putting a little too much anger here for a story of how a fictional family of Kung Fu traditionalists trained a kid in martial arts for all his life and is now schooling a bunch of non physically active gamers in "live" combat. Not saying Kung Fu practitioners would always beat modern MMA but Kung fu is wide enough that they could hold their own if there. Except ground work. There is not much there, some but not alot. Fighting is all about skill and the tools you can use. MMA people practice in an all rounder method so they have alot of tools to pick. Skill makes up for the difference. So don't just use the whole "this style is better so it will beat this style", it is always "this guy with his tools might win against that guy with his tools". Never black and white.
Dude. I think you are putting a little too much anger here for a story of how a fictional family of Kung Fu traditionalists trained a kid in martial arts for all his life and is now schooling a bunch of non physically active gamers in "live" combat. Not saying Kung Fu practitioners would always beat modern MMA but Kung fu is wide enough that they could hold their own if there. Except ground work. There is not much there, some but not alot. Fighting is all about skill and the tools you can use. MMA people practice in an all rounder method so they have alot of tools to pick. Skill makes up for the difference. So don't just use the whole "this style is better so it will beat this style", it is always "this guy with his tools might win against that guy with his tools". Never black and white.
Whatever. Wanna try something new? Where the ML is loving & considerate towards the FL? And where both of them are independent in their own fields? Give it a try "Lyricist: Her Revenge"
Thank you, you saved my time, i really can't stand p*ssy beggars and white knights.
So, I'll start by saying that I read a lot of webnovels and this is one of my favorites. I think it'd be a mistake to judge anything just on one review, so it bums me out that so many comments are saying that this review was how they decided not to read this novel. Anyway, you're entitled to your own opinion, but I personally find the characters very humorous and I like the way the MC can chill out and treat a game as a game. He forgives other people who do ridiculous stuff, because it really is just a game and it'd be ridiculous to hold people accountable for the things they do in a game as if it were real life.
Please review my novel EEWAO. Eng-V (Game novel blue white cover) Im still learning tho. Please help me fix my novel by review wich wrong wich right. I take bad comment, but please show me wich part that need fix. Your review will really really make me happy. Thanks. Hope u have a nice day :)
I'm so glad you wrote this. I'm currently on chapter 630 and I agree completely. When I read this review and everyone agreeing with it I was was disheartened because I love this Webnovel so much. I think the characters are very well rounded and I'm laughing at their interactions in almost every chapter. Plus I also feel like the original reviewer missed out on a lot of things because while reading; in their review there is so much left out that explains much of what they dislike about the novel and I feel like its giving expectations to other readers. They might have found that they personally liked the novel had they given it a try simply because this review is not an accurate representation of the novel that I myself understand to have read.
