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DarkKnight32
DarkKnight32Lv65yr
2019-05-15 02:30

Mc is ok but the story is trash first he hunts most of the time where there is lvl 40-50 humanoid monsters he is using trash sword and equipment how!!! i dont know... would allllll those monsters he killed not drop good equipment??? he is in a high lvl area??? second we have no idea what are the equipment stats.... third way is everyone stupid in this world there is like 2 people who have normal intelligence almost all of them are like young masters from those cultivation novel wtf???? This is suppose to be a high tech advance civilization that have developed VR way the **** is everyones IQ 10???? I really hate this kind of Chinese novel they dont make fucking sense everyone of them have that 4th grade syndrome or whatever it is called.. it would be much better if the author did a novel about this guy but he got transported in another world where he got a kids body and has talent to become a mage but he is really weak this way we could see how mc grows into a real combat mage not this stupid ****

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ThrustThunder
ThrustThunderLv6

Tvtropes. org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Chuunibyou And since VRMMO's are all the rage these days the Author decided it would just be easier to copy/paste all the ideas directly from established IP's then have to struggle to do his own World building.

paijoageng
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Shiro_MSFA
Shiro_MSFALv4

Please review my novel EEWAO. Eng-V (Game novel blue white cover) Im still learning tho. Please help me fix my novel by review wich wrong wich right. I take bad comment, but please show me wich part that need fix. Your review will really really make me happy. Thanks. Hope u have a nice day :)

DarkKnight32
DarkKnight32Lv6

Ok i will first read it then do a review probably gonna take few days if its a long one i have school tomorrow

Shiro_MSFA:Please review my novel EEWAO. Eng-V (Game novel blue white cover) Im still learning tho. Please help me fix my novel by review wich wrong wich right. I take bad comment, but please show me wich part that need fix. Your review will really really make me happy. Thanks. Hope u have a nice day :)
Shiro_MSFA
Shiro_MSFALv4

man.. thanks... im waiting for your comment and review :) have a good day at school

DarkKnight32:Ok i will first read it then do a review probably gonna take few days if its a long one i have school tomorrow
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read Hitman Hitman Garden, you won't be disappointed

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