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Hello, the author here,I'm giving myself a biased 5 stars, obviously. This novel will receive at least 7 chapters weekly, up to 14 chapters weekly at maximum. The MC is a very op person, who has lived through three other lives, one in the Naruto World, one in an Immortal World, and the first one in the same world as us. Hopefully you like it, it's a bit slow paced, and the pairing is Xiao Ning'er x MC (Shen Tian).

I just found this, and I have to say; it’s great!! I already liked your Naruto fanfic, but it lacked the cultivation aspect that i’m craving recently, so this fiction will be a great snack. Thanks for the meal ;P

Decent idea, bad execution. The way the story flows feels unnatural and even the "sudden death" of his father feels bland and not enough to stimulate the reader's emotions as we haven't grown attached to the character. I recommend to have shown his plans one by one as part of the story instead of dumping it all in one go, readers want to read story, not info dumps.

Writing Quality 3/5 - writing is not perfect but the message is there and you can understand the story flow enough to enjoy the story.. Stability of Updates 4/5 - pretty good update rate...its 16 now but when i found it a few days back it only had like 9 so pretty fast Story Development 3/5 - pretty good premise and direction, rated only a 3 are there are some points where other readers point out that feels a bit.. well not forced but strange Character Design 3/5 - its a fanfic where author needs to portray characters of a different author in the right way so 3 is a good number World Background 4/5 - it is essentially the TDG world with various elements from other fictions i can take inconsistency with the plot or character behavior.... one thing i cant take is inconsistency in mechanic and forcing something to happen but when you look at it... it doesnt really work...changed my review, it still the same just changed some of the unreasonable things i wrote lol....

Don't expect this novel to be like every other fanfic, where the MC actually knows about the world he got sent to, while also being overpowered. But for me I like those types of fanfics where the MC actually knows the world he got reincarnated into, and he takes advantage of future events that are going to happen. Of course a Little OPness never hurt nobody. Many people might say that the one thing this novel has going for it is that it has no harem. Which for me I don't mind either way, as long as it's a good story. But for me this novel has a lot of problems from the very beginning. In the first chapter he's described as someone who has been reincarnated multiple times. One of those worlds being the Naruto World, which he knew about before hand. He has also lived Millions if not billions of years. During all that time he has accumulated millions of years of knowledge and experience. The author gave him this OP background, where the MC was actually at the top of the food chain in his previous worlds. But then comes the next chapters and he dumb's down the MC and nerfs his abilities. He nerfs him so hes not so OP early on, but doing that disregards how stuff works like chakra. He also dumb's him down when hes supposed to be the smartest person in all the universe. Whats the point of giving him a background like that just to nerf him. Why not just give him a not so overpowered background or do the old cliche "he lost his memories" then over time unlock them to make him stronger. You would think being in a different world of cultivation. He would want to get stronger, because he does not know what may happen. I mean he knows nothing about this world so he knows nothing about future events, and him having lived in other worlds of cultivation were the strong pray on the weak. You would think he would be in a hurry to get stronger so that nothing unexpected happens that's out of his control, but he doesn't. He has the mind set of "Will see what happens". He doesn't act how you would think some one that has accumulated so much experiences in his many years of life would act. At times the MC is smart and at times he's dumb, he's inconsistent. He has certain skills where you wonder why he isn't taking advantage of them like the Clone Jutsu of Naruto's. There's just too much stuff that doesn't add up and i would be writing forever. So I just can't keep reading it anymore. Score wise I'm giving the writing quality a 4-star. It wasn't too good to start, but it got better over time. Stability updates I'm giving it a 3-star. I went and looked at his recent updates to see how frequent hes updating. It doesn't look too stable but it's good enough Story development for me is a 2-star. MC was dumb down so it Sort of ruined it from there for me, and the pace is too slow. It feels like it's at least three times slower than the original novel. Character design 1-star. What's the point in giving him an OP background just to dumb him down and nerf him. World development 2-star. What is there to say about this. Its basically the same world as the original. From what I have read he hasn't done much to change it yet. You may like it but, i just don't so this is my review.

So like can the mc even use his knowledge from his past life to help himself improve in this world? I mean each world has different concept, laws, energy to manipulate, ways to become strong , etc. No before that, will he even retain his memory after reincarnating

Wow i really Hope that there is more chapter comming from this one than the original You're doing great in a lot of different book but all of them are great Keep up the good work :-) Thanks a lot

Perfect. I love it. The only thing this novel needs is more chapters. Please don't drop this one OR rush the story either, like you did the other one.