Review Detail of Randolph03 in Battle Royale of the Sinners
Review detail
Good story's foundation Good story's background Good story's pacing Good character's interaction Good character's personality Good character's background Good ... Good ... ... Well, many good things can be reviewed from this novel especially the MC. Not to mention that this story is using a historical reference, which makes is becoming more interesting and moreover since the entrance of the mental girl, some medic terms can also be learnt from here Since I have taken a liking towards the MC, his personality to be more specific, I hope that there won't be abrupt change to his personality and please NO NTR! since I absolutely hate that **** Last but not least, thanks for writing this amazing story and I have to say that your grammar is quite excellent, there's no need to degrade yourself that much since there's only some typo, but the story itself is enchanted further by the fluid grammar used The occassional references and jokes used are also good to keep the mood up Once more, thanks for the novel **: I've rewritten the review for the fourth time since it always failed to post before
Battle Royale of the Sinners
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Dude... that's what you're paying attention to? I guess it should've been black since it's set in ancient china
TinyOrc:What's the hair color of the mc?
... good character's background doesn't means that the appearances are described that clear... or what, you mean those generic xianxia/xuanhuan novel describing girls that appears out of nowhere similar to pests using 1 to 2 paragraphs every time they appears? Good background character means they have solid foundation for their reason of living, their own lives and their own personality... (sorry for the long ranting since I'm getting fed up with those xianxia)
TinyOrc:I was just asking because apparently there's good Character background. Or maybe not if the author doesn't even vaguely describe his characters.
"This sandwich is the best sandwich! 5/5" Oh? What bread is on the sandwich? "*Realizes that there is no bread on the best sandwich.* Reeeeeeee." Guess this sandwich isn't for everyone.
Randolph03:... good character's background doesn't means that the appearances are described that clear... or what, you mean those generic xianxia/xuanhuan novel describing girls that appears out of nowhere similar to pests using 1 to 2 paragraphs every time they appears? Good background character means they have solid foundation for their reason of living, their own lives and their own personality... (sorry for the long ranting since I'm getting fed up with those xianxia)
TinyOrc:"This sandwich is the best sandwich! 5/5" Oh? What bread is on the sandwich? "*Realizes that there is no bread on the best sandwich.* Reeeeeeee." Guess this sandwich isn't for everyone.
Fluid gramma?? Lol No. Its not that bad, but fluid No. Im really strict with gramma of stories i read, but this story wanders just a few steps from the line, leaving me to constantly ponder on wether or not i should drop it. I only read 2 chapters so far, and came to the reviews to see if others agreed with me.
Well, we have different criteria in scoring then... I mean I'm not even that picky and it's all good as long as I can compherend the story by reading it without trying too much...
krill:Fluid gramma?? Lol No. Its not that bad, but fluid No. Im really strict with gramma of stories i read, but this story wanders just a few steps from the line, leaving me to constantly ponder on wether or not i should drop it. I only read 2 chapters so far, and came to the reviews to see if others agreed with me.
