What can I say the story is total crap. And more so 5 wishes he made. Chapters are quite short and don't really make much of sense. And protagonist as in every Dbz fanfic is a kind-hearted and peace-loving god. Anyway maybe someone will like this kind of story..
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I love it when people review a novel by just reading the first chapter. Nice 👆🏻🍕
First chapter was enough for me to make opinion what kind of personality Mc will have. And that most inportant factor in the while story for me, so when I see kind hearted and peace loving Mc I drop it after first chapter usually.
Okay 👌🏻 it’s fine, think whatever you want, I also don’t want to read a novel that doesn’t make me excited or the personality of the character doesn’t go well with me.
Well I don't mean to offend you, but at least 90% of stories I try to read, are crap for me. Mainly because Mc personally and actions are not interesting or exciting in any way for me. So good luck, there are many who love your story, it's impossible to write a story for everyone's liking.
Bye It was a nice and short chat.
