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AnRa
AnRaLv144yr
2021-04-19 19:17

The idea of the story is interesting, but i think you rushed a bit too much in the flashback chapter, the relationship between each character is a bit awkward because of it, for example the MC is mad when the hollow ate his vice captain, bc we don't know what the MC feel about his VC, it's a bit too forced, the same thing happened with the captain commander. In my opinion you can probably explain about his past in the first and second volume, or maybe explain his third life with ichigo a bit more and make his past with yoruichi more mysterious. *Sorry if there something wrong with what i wrote, english isn't my first language. Thx

Bleach Soul Blast

Shaikh_Tohaa
4.6
132 Chs

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Ballad
BalladLv5

Ya this story was a confusing read

3yr
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SherlockHolmes221B
SherlockHolmes221BLv4

man if you have to read maze runner then you must be crying right now because if you can't handle this level then you can't handle that

3yr
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XIANJING
XIANJINGLv3

actually this is quite good and simple, but why are many confused, this proves that most fanfic webnovel readers are still underage or are still children. or they're just dumb, this is way better than another fanfic called Protagonist Killer

4yr

Lordmoonlight
LordmoonlightLv10

won't like needs an editor story got lot of potential I was confused by the way you change it from modern day when hes classmate of the original bleach cast and then hes a reincarnated person who died again I think after he was an op captain

4yr
SHURA
SHURALv3

The first 50 chapters were very entertaining and interesting, however after the reincarnation event everything goes downhill, useless scenes and fillers that practically do not add anything to the story, the protagonist becomes stupid, let alone the scenes Most recent forced

3yr
nacht
nachtLv14

it's confusing when reading this fanfic because when I read until chapter 7 i feel like there is no explanation what is mc is, what is mc goal, where this story going, why mc memory change when he killed by hollow of inoue older brother, and etc

4yr
Exargna
ExargnaLv1

To be honest, this fan fiction is below average. Before that, it was more or less average, but after the crossover with DxD began and the harem appeared, everything went downhill. All female characters fall in love with the main character because of a banal flirtation... The whole world indulges the desires of the hero, most of the characters are simple NPCs... The main character is an ordinary Gary Stew. That's probably all. Arrivederci.

3yr
Toxic_318
Toxic_318Lv4

Well, I'd say this novel was average. Confusing start with the world background not being stated clearly. Below average usage of grammar and annoying mistakes in writing that grates on your nerves. In my opinion, this novel deserves about 2 stars rating at most. I'm seeing that most of the reviews are 5 star spams. Don't read this fanfic. The ratings are fake.

3yr
Pointles
PointlesLv4

wow just wow this is truly amazing ..................................................................................................

4yr
FAP_Master_
FAP_Master_Lv6

Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.

3yr
kobeblackmamba
kobeblackmambaLv7

For the bankai I have a idea , He create a water zone like kisame fusion with samehada , but the difference is he became water so he can attack the enemy from every where, he can detect every source of water inside this water zone si aizen Perfect illusion don't work on him, and like kisame the zone move with him , I think it would be OP but it would made sense with his shikai For the bankai I have a idea , He create a water zone like kisame fusion with samehada , but the difference is he became water so he can attack the enemy from every where, he can detect every source of water inside this water zone si aizen Perfect illusion don't work on him, and like kisame the zone move with him , I think it would be OP but it would made sense with his shikai

4yr
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