Review Detail of Golias in One piece: Journey with a system

Well, come on, the story is not the worst I’ve read, yet it made me quit even when the worst ones didn’t.   "But is the story that bad?" Well, no, but I have a list of my own reasons, which can also be yours. Reason 1- Mc marine I am not saying that being a marine is bad, by no means, I have read many good stories of marines, the problem is that the author skipped all that part and ran from him joining the Garp until he became a reserve admiral in two chapters. (I know this may be for hiding certain things, but this is also my third reason later.) Reason 2- Mc joins Luffy MC joins Luffy's crew when he meets him, I wasn't expecting that, ever, MC says it's for a while and because of a mission, but for me it still doesn't pay to be under someone, even more when you have the strength of an admiral and the luffy in this phase has at most the strength of the crocodile, what will he be doing there? Watching the story go on while having tea and writing your book, not my type, sorry. Reason 3-I hate mystery The author says that the MC has a whole reason to do what he does and a hidden personality, okay, but I hate mystery! When I start a story I think, the MC is me with a different personality, let's see what I'm going to do and see in third person. The problem when the author hides everything is that I can't do this anymore, I'm just a guy listening to someone else's story and the person is still prolonging the events when he tells me to create a “suspense”, it irritates me, knowing that he has hidden reasons irritates me, knowing that he has a hidden personality irritates me. Finally, author, I'm not writing this review to harm you, but for people like me who read the reviews before reading a story, I really wanted to read a review like that before I started reading, anyway ... good luck with your story, I will leave the criticism as a spoiler for only people like me to read.