grammer is fine, but the story, its just another chuunibyou author writing his wet dreams without much thought of how social life really works
TheSilverQuill
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LIKETheSilverQuill:thanks for the feedback, it helps. Also, where did the wet dreams come from? I don't remember writing anything like that
Random_Asian:Ppl usually forget dreams after a few minutes, happens all the time
I was on the fence about giving your novel a chance but the good way you took the criticism and banter made me want to read it
TheSilverQuill:Lol
Grape_yeast:I was on the fence about giving your novel a chance but the good way you took the criticism and banter made me want to read it