Review Detail of G_SoulKing in The Dawn of The New World

Writing quality 4.5/5 World background 4/5 But the character development is not realistic. I simply can't understand the author's thinking. I get it, he doesn't have a great childhood. But his mother doesn't abandoned him willingly. Her family forced her, and even still she tried to make up to him. She is always nice to him and helps him every time but he doesn't have and love for his mother. Then suddenly the world ends and he was invited to another family. And in a few days he fell so much in love with that family that he is ready to do anything to protect them. This is not how human beings work.... At least let him show some resistance at the beginning. And i don't like how he is treating someone else sister as his whole world in a few days. And the reason is because she is cute....seriously...it doesn't make sense. Anyway your writingstyle is good, I like it. It would be good if you make the beginning better because that is what attracts the readers. I was expecting a cold MC at the beginning who begins to warm up as the story goes on according to your description of him at the beginning