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G_SoulKing1yrReplied to ShadowMonarch21Well I ment the word dragon not celestial dragon. Momonosuke can turn into a dragon. It was a joke.
"F**k... Dragons. From now on I will be the enemy of anyone associated with the word dragons; Momonosuke must die", he growls in annoyance.- G_SoulKing1yrReplied to Pingui0510
Then you tag me the line where I wrote that he consumes his stamina by standing still. The fact that he used his power to recover from exhaustion is already proof that he doesn't consume his stamina by standing still.
Previously he did not do it because he did not have any time during the day and also because direct exposure to sunlight increases his power many times thereby consuming too much stamina. He will gasp after a few punches. Now he can stably increase his strength by training at night. - G_SoulKing1yrReplied to Pingui0510
Well if you want an instantly OP MC, I guess this is not your place.
Previously he did not do it because he did not have any time during the day and also because direct exposure to sunlight increases his power many times thereby consuming too much stamina. He will gasp after a few punches. Now he can stably increase his strength by training at night. - G_SoulKing1yrReplied to Pingui0510
I mentioned at the beginning that before he got caught by the slave traders he did not keep a low profile.
"Elders, they belong to a group of slaves privately owned by some nobles. Their identity information must be in the hands of the nobles who own them but we found out that there is no such record. Lions Michael was found because he used to be very active at the sea before he got captured, we were able to dig out everything about him after getting his name. But the others were unknown people who were sold by slave traders, we can't even find their names" - G_SoulKing1yrReplied to Grammy
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This paragraph has been deleted. - G_SoulKing1yrReplied to Obligation
In my setting devil fruit users will have some basic knowledge about their fruit powers just after eating them.
At the sixth turn Hancock also ate her devil fruit, mero mero no mi. But she did not report the correct ability of the devil fruit. She just said that she can turn people who like her into stone. It sounded like a curse. She did not report that this fruit can make 99% of people irresistible to her charm. - G_SoulKing1yrReplied to Obligation
He can't make solid cloud. Mabe he can do it with haki someday
He didn't forget to collect information while training. He found a troublesome thing that the key to the explosive collar is in the hands of Celestial Dragons. Every Celestial Dragon has a group of slaves of their own and owns a master key and they belong to the Rosward's family. So, if he wants to steal the key he has to infiltrate the Rosward's manor which is very risky. But he turned this into motivation and increased his training. - G_SoulKing1yrReplied to Naruto_uzumaki_7792Ch 5 Getting stronger
- G_SoulKing1yrReplied to commander_pride_21
It is explained. And is already using his devil fruit power in this chapter.
After some time when he was crossing a thickly forested area, a black Panther suddenly jumped out from the side and tried to bite him in the neck. He was already prepared for it so he quickly rolled out of the way and distanced himself from the panther. As early as when he got the feeling of being peeped he knows that someone or something is targeting him so he had never relaxed his vigilance on the way. - G_SoulKing1yrReplied to Naruto_uzumaki_7792
The setting will not fit in if the MC is a small guy like luffy. Whitebeard, kaido, douglas bullet, the admirals, garp, songoku, which one of the older generation doesn't isn't a big muscular man. And starting from shanks era and among the evil generation of luffy, zoro, law, kid and others which one is a big guy. Don't you think the idea of a big guy looking down on these guys is amazing. I am out, you are digging out my ideas🤣🤣
Ch 5 Getting stronger - G_SoulKing1yrReplied to Naruto_uzumaki_7792
You can just think of any muscular hunk if you want and the MC is not a repleca of Escanor it's just a reference. He definitely does not have Escanor's small feet and weak legs🤣🤣. The hair and eye colour are also different, as well as their appearance. The MC is a totally different person.
Ch 5 Getting stronger - G_SoulKing1yrReplied to Mr_CuakCh 4 Escape plan
- G_SoulKing1yrCommented
So quest reward are given before completing the quest. One of the worst setting.
Without waiting any longer, he then opened the small vial and emptied its contents into his mouth, gulping down every last bit. - G_SoulKing1yrCommented
The not blood related plot😬
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wowww....! I come back here after a long time. I got myself lost in the dao of MLT. Let me share you some of my enlightenment about this novel. I have read some 100s of chapters(maybe 200,300 definitely more than 200). I wished I could read more but the MC's character suddenly change which makes me feel like a swallowed🤢 a fly so i vomited🤮 all out and stoped there. world background: 5/5 character design: 4.5/5 character development: 4.5/5(initial arc) This novel started out great(maybe even better than "primordial war" in some aspects). The world background is fascinating. I remembered I was playing a vivid 3D picture in my mind when I read this novel. The story is just the right pace not too fast nor too slow. Tribes are competing among each other, stealing from each other and killing each other. I thought this will be the theme of this novel where MC 's sense of belonging is only to his tribe( and it should be in my opinion because this is fuck*** primordial era). But to my utter dismay 🤬🤬 'Chinese novel's MC syndrome'(brain dead) kick in. When MC traveled far away from his tribe to an unknown place he met a group of savage who fed their tribesman to a strong beast for its protection ( which is the most common way of survival for the weak in this era) MC suddenly becomes hotblooded (and shouted "We savage are never slaves" 🤣). He was talking something about human beings being the strongest, helping each other, and cannot bow to beast for survival and he decided to take this group of weak, malnourished, old savages through thousands of miles filled with savage beast when he is not even strong enough to protect himself. he decided to take them back to his tribe and raise them. It just fucking came out of nowhere and absolutely disgust me when he has the idea of "for humanity" here. "Chronicle of primordial war" has a consistent style and is way more suitable for the "primordial era" theme. He is not a hero type. He kills, he steals, he robs but sometimes his modern thinking some points. Like he think human beings is supreme, human dignity (which I absolutely didn't mind if he use it for himself.) but he applied it to some savage who cannot even protect themselves Or eat their full or even speak a language which reduces his IQ to zero and finally becomes a typical CN's MC.