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if the author does make it a fine mature harem novel then let's try making it best there is, if not atleast top 10, so fans come and give your power stone and make it the best

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Muito bom a novel recomendo à todos a acompanhar, não vão se arrepender. ....................................................................................😍

I read the author's monologue and totally disagree. As? My fanfic sucks, but since it's a fanfic, okay? I love OP but it has to make sense. Praise be to Saitama Sensei.

Bland and boring, nothing really unqiue. The story just like any other bad generic fanfic. A mary sue character that just went 0-100 in an instant. 0 ******* in any scenes. Simplistic character who dosent really have a thought process and just go scene to scene. Bad grammar. And female sidechicks who might as well be any random female due to a lack of personality or if there were just the typical generic anime bimbo The first few chapter have very little or no world building or characther, and it only goes down hill from there Really dont get why the review rated it so high.

Great work! More chapters please! And please don’t drop it like the other authors! Great work! More chapters please! And please don’t drop it like the other authors! Great work! More chapters please! And please don’t drop it like the other authors!

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The problem with this is he SEVERELY changes the characters personalities, and ruins certain elements of the one piece world that shouldn't be changed.