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Roktah
RoktahLv156yr
2018-09-24 23:51

a waste of time. there is nothing interesting to read, he gets rinnegan and full elemental control + op stats within a week of entering the one piece world. mc is boring and gets everything from the system with no effort(since he was close to water he got wind and water release completel mastered, close to vulcano,on an island... you get the gist.) if you want to know how bad it is, just read the first and maybe second chapter.... and yes it only gets worse.

Sage system: Worlds Collide

ghosttown
4.0
41 Chs

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Ove1230
Ove1230Lv12

Probably some dot head talking **** and doesn’t actually know how to read

6yr
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Chaotic_Winter
Chaotic_WinterLv13

The author himself said it’s his fanfic and it’s about a super OP mc you don’t have to diss him like that

6yr
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Chaotic_Winter
Chaotic_WinterLv13

And the funny part is he still read till the 12th chapter, probably even has it in his library

6yr
1
Roktah
RoktahLv15

well it might get better so i had to continue to read. they are rookie writers most of the time and some of them do improve, if you want me to be like you and rate every **** story with 5 stars just bc the writer is new then what use does the rating system have? the fact that a lot of people hand out 5 stars while reading 0, 1 or 2 chapters should concern you, not me who read 12 and then gave my opinion super op mc ok but why bother sealing his rinnegan and then just activating it with no effort. just give him the damn thing unlocked in the first place. so i actually read the latest chapter today and this is the novel where our mc gets ntred by his own clone, there was a reason i deleted this novel from my library.

Chaotic_Winter:And the funny part is he still read till the 12th chapter, probably even has it in his library
6yr
5
Nier_Xue
Nier_XueLv5

He is just sharing his opinion.. Gosh.. What is the rating system is there for.. Do you guys even know what rating means? Oh wait! This is qidian.. Sorry...

6yr
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Ove1230
Ove1230Lv12

Are you going to release today or what what the ****

6yr
Chunchunmaru_sama
Chunchunmaru_samaLv6

T FCK? He gets NTR'ed?

5yr
GalaxyDWolf
GalaxyDWolfLv5

You are an idiot. While I agree that the Mc is overpowered. This story has tons of potential. And while he may be overpowered now imagine what happens when he finally meets someone he can’t beat the drama and character development that can come from it could be huge

5yr
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SHIROSAIKI
SHIROSAIKILv4

if the author does make it a fine mature harem novel then let's try making it best there is, if not atleast top 10, so fans come and give your power stone and make it the best

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Chaotic_Winter
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Reveal spoiler

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OFFLINE23
OFFLINE23Lv5

Reveal spoiler

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Melshan
MelshanLv7

Muito bom a novel recomendo à todos a acompanhar, não vão se arrepender. ....................................................................................😍

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memberberry
memberberryLv5

I read the author's monologue and totally disagree. As? My fanfic sucks, but since it's a fanfic, okay? I love OP but it has to make sense. Praise be to Saitama Sensei.

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Nut
NutLv5

Bland and boring, nothing really unqiue. The story just like any other bad generic fanfic. A mary sue character that just went 0-100 in an instant. 0 ******* in any scenes. Simplistic character who dosent really have a thought process and just go scene to scene. Bad grammar. And female sidechicks who might as well be any random female due to a lack of personality or if there were just the typical generic anime bimbo The first few chapter have very little or no world building or characther, and it only goes down hill from there Really dont get why the review rated it so high.

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LawLife
LawLifeLv4

Great work! More chapters please! And please don’t drop it like the other authors! Great work! More chapters please! And please don’t drop it like the other authors! Great work! More chapters please! And please don’t drop it like the other authors!

6yr
Ove1230
Ove1230Lv12

Reveal spoiler

6yr
EldridSmith
EldridSmithLv5

The problem with this is he SEVERELY changes the characters personalities, and ruins certain elements of the one piece world that shouldn't be changed.

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