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Roktah
RoktahLv156yr
2018-09-24 23:51

a waste of time. there is nothing interesting to read, he gets rinnegan and full elemental control + op stats within a week of entering the one piece world. mc is boring and gets everything from the system with no effort(since he was close to water he got wind and water release completel mastered, close to vulcano,on an island... you get the gist.) if you want to know how bad it is, just read the first and maybe second chapter.... and yes it only gets worse.

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Ove1230
Ove1230Lv12

Probably some dot head talking **** and doesn’t actually know how to read

Chaotic_Winter
Chaotic_WinterLv13

The author himself said it’s his fanfic and it’s about a super OP mc you don’t have to diss him like that

Chaotic_Winter
Chaotic_WinterLv13

And the funny part is he still read till the 12th chapter, probably even has it in his library

Roktah
RoktahLv15

well it might get better so i had to continue to read. they are rookie writers most of the time and some of them do improve, if you want me to be like you and rate every **** story with 5 stars just bc the writer is new then what use does the rating system have? the fact that a lot of people hand out 5 stars while reading 0, 1 or 2 chapters should concern you, not me who read 12 and then gave my opinion super op mc ok but why bother sealing his rinnegan and then just activating it with no effort. just give him the damn thing unlocked in the first place. so i actually read the latest chapter today and this is the novel where our mc gets ntred by his own clone, there was a reason i deleted this novel from my library.

Chaotic_Winter:And the funny part is he still read till the 12th chapter, probably even has it in his library
Nier_Xue
Nier_XueLv5

He is just sharing his opinion.. Gosh.. What is the rating system is there for.. Do you guys even know what rating means? Oh wait! This is qidian.. Sorry...

Ove1230
Ove1230Lv12

Are you going to release today or what what the ****

Chunchunmaru_sama
Chunchunmaru_samaLv6

T FCK? He gets NTR'ed?

GalaxyDWolf
GalaxyDWolfLv5

You are an idiot. While I agree that the Mc is overpowered. This story has tons of potential. And while he may be overpowered now imagine what happens when he finally meets someone he can’t beat the drama and character development that can come from it could be huge

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