First, a warning for any reader that doesn't like a main character that is an immoral psychopath: he ultimately becomes a rapist and child killer. I write this realizing that most people don't read reviews, they rely on stars or the author's own summary (as I did). This is the first dark piece of 💩 that I have had the misfortune to read on this site. However, people can read and write what they want. Just consider this fair warning. Second, the writing isn't horrible as there appears to be some level of editing. Spelling and grammatical errors are minimal, and if it wasn't for the content of the writing, I might have stuck it out. Third, if it wasn't for negative character development, there would be no development at all. The author clearly invested some effort in creating his characters and their backstories (more than most amateur writers), but the characters don't really progress beyond when readers first read about them. There are undoubtedly readers that like this kind of dark writing, but I'm not one of them. I don't really think that anyone psychologically healthy would enjoy it, but if you like psychopathic main characters that are insecure, unstable, and become child murderers and rapists, I guess that this novel is for you.
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